The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with this statement. Any person who wants to achieve something has to go through the process of learning the necessary skills and executing them to the level needed. This leads to some failures in the process. At every failure there are at least two options, one is to keep trying and the other is to give up. If given up at that stage, then it leads only to personal dissatisfaction at a later stage.
Personally, I live by that motto, but it is not the only guiding principle in my life. For the things that matter most to me, I don't take the option of giving up. There are many examples in life which show that trying one more time, with only little more intelligence leads to success. A famous example for the above case is Edison's research on the filament, which lead to his successful creation of the filament bulb. This invention changed the course of the world.
In conclusion, for every task we take up, we need to evaluate our passion for that task. If it is the task that means most to us at that point, we should never give up.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, as to, at least, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 1977.66487455 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 196.0 407.700716846 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37755102041 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36662110618 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 618.680645161 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9806930477 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188055714651 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735302001601 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701323988829 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115556541637 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179871726565 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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