the extended family member is less important now than it was in the past.

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the extended family member is less important now than it was in the past.

family: Verdana; color: rgb(53, 55, 68); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">relatives are the most important things in our life. However, In todays world the life become more complicated than ever before. Therfore,I agree that people tends to have less family members and live with there own small familly members. I feel this way for two raesons, which i will demonstrate in the follwoing essay.

family: Verdana; color: rgb(53, 55, 68); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"> first of all, In todays modren world, live expencies and responsibillity increased astrinomically. people nowadays have to work more hours, furthermore, they have less lesiure time even for themselves. As a resulst their attention for having kids and being connected with their relatives coming to disapear. my personal experienice is a compelling example of this. Ten years ago when i was living in my granparents house, we were three family, my familly and two uncle with there children and wifes. the huse was avtive and fulfillment of joy and exitments. After my grandparents died, we moved every one with his famliy to live seperatly; Cosequantly, we missed each other and we coudln't gather even in big hollydays every body live with his owen proplems and responsupillity.

family: Verdana; color: rgb(53, 55, 68); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"> Moreovwe, Indivedulas now try to make a study and calculation for their live expences befor make dicesion for havnig children. Evey thing is cuonting for taking risk if they did not use the right measurments. Therfore, family brancch became less and the connections between them vanish. I noticed this espicially in a hight developed country . becuse parents have to take care for their kids and relative from different prospective, such as, educationlly and healthy. On the other hand, foe instance I born and lived in libya, which the education and healt orgnization supported by the goverments. As a result, the majority of families are larger and extended in myriad way. For exaple the average for the number of familly member in libya arround six to seven person which is quite high comparing with other comunity in different part in the world.

family: Verdana; color: rgb(53, 55, 68); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">In conclusion, I belive of the increased damandings and needs in this modren life is one of the maun causes for having less extending family members. Also is depends in which part of this world we lived and raised.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2562.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98598130841 4.8611393121 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.24084219586 2.67179642975 159% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546728971963 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 760.5 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.6689178195 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.454545455 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.40909090909 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102470551223 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036826453149 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491424349405 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639635547503 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412616439873 0.0645574589148 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.46 10.9000537634 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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