In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Living longer is an important subject for people all over the world. Each year, a lot of scientists do various researches among this topic because people always wish to be eternal and enjoy their endless life beside their family. Some people believe that in recent years the length of human life increase rather than past. Others hold an opposite opinion. In my view, now a days, people live longer than before for two remarkable reasons.
First, in todays life, human are living longer becuase of improving in health condition. There are a lot of deseases and microbs that threat the health of people, by developing the scince in recent decads, we could know different types of microbs and theirs treatments. Therefore, people can prevent of desease, and the level of health condition increasing. For example, I saw a documentary about the health issues in Africa. It showed that in past the level of the health condition was low and people had no knowlege about necessory medical information. Even, there was neither hospital nor primary health equipment for treating ill persons. Each years, large number of people suffer from deases like Polio, and malta fever which today can treat easily. Moreover, many pregnant women die or left their infants because of lack of medical equipments and inapropprate health condition. At the end od the documentry, a table of results clearly showed the increase of human age against improving health condition through recent years. As you can see, if there had been better health condition, past people would live longer.
Second, improving type of nutrition leading to longer human's life. Different source of nutrition, either vegeterian or meat, containing large amount of vitamins, protoin, and minirals. When people feed from variety of foods, their body requirments are responded. As a result, people have healtheir body that cause longer life. For instance, when I was in university, I studied food industry. For one of my courses, I should do a project about kind of feeding in past time. After using a lot of reliable sources,surprisingly, I noticed that potatoes and tomatos, at first, were considerd to be poisinous. Therefore, for several years, people deprived themeselves from this nutrient foods. However, today, people know that patato and tomato contain a lot of vitamins and antioxcide which boost body against canser. Also, I observed a study that showed for healthy body you need to balance your diet through feeding pyramid. Among study's investigation, in past people ate foods to full their stomache and didn't pay attantion to its nutrient value, but today, addition to concerning to kind of foods, people use variouse sort of suppliments to balence their diets. More attention to diet providing healthier body and longer life. This experience proved to me that better feeding leads to increase life length.
In conclusion, today, people can live longer than past. Not only does better health condition increase the lenghth of humans life, but type of nutriotion also has noticeable effect on it. I think people should pay more attention in their health if they want to have longer life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2651.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 515.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14757281553 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60661079416 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545631067961 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 803.7 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0678989053 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5161290323 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6129032258 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03225806452 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170977613188 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501080914754 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049347446528 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116095784046 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295847225747 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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