Health and wellness is a growing concern for a number of people across the globe. Some people believe a well-balanced diet and exercise routine is the best way to stay healthy. Others suggest that good health has less to do with what you eat, and more to do with how you live. In other words, maintaining positive relationships with friends and family is a better way to remain healthy.
There is no shortage of opinion on the best way to stay in shape. In my opinion, I believe a combination of a balanced diet and exercise is the best way to remain healthy. I feel this way for two many reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First of all, a well-balanced diet has been proven to help people stay fit throughout history. Most importantly, cutting out heavily processed foods and fast foods is an absolute must for those who are overweight. My personal experience is a great example of this. My mother always used to struggle with losing weight. She tried so many different kinds of diets throughout her life. They are always focused on denying her one of the food groups, such as bread and grains, but never addressed over-processed food consumption. Finally, she went to a nutritionist who advised her to just eat natural and organic food in the proper proportions. My mom lost thirty pounds in eight weeks after that. More importantly, she felt stronger physically and more focused mentally. For this reason, I would start by altering my diet if I wanted to improve my overall health.
Secondly, exercise is the next best way to stay fit and active. Working out causes the heart rate to increase and this leads to burning calories and fat. It is not necessary to spend hours and hours at the gym either. The most important thing is to get a little bit exercise every single day. Drawing from my own experience, when I first moved to Madrid, I did not have a car. I had to walk 45 minutes to and from school every day. Moreover, on weekends, I would ride a bicycle around the local neighbourhood to go shopping and meet friends. It’s certainly clear to see how daily, moderate exercise is a key component to improving one’ overall health.
In conclusion, I do believe that good health is best achieved by treating the body to good food and moderate exercise. This is because these two habits will eventually lead to a reduction in weight and an increase in overall well-being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69662921348 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70361338073 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598314606742 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9695910583 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.6956521739 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4782608696 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30434782609 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214131626148 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530834357381 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630884686914 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130788454904 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413461250589 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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