Health and wellness is a growing concern for a number of people across the globe. Some people believe a
well-balanced diet and exercise routine is the best way to stay healthy. Others suggest that good health
has less to do with what you eat and more to do with how you live. In other words, maintaining positive
relationships with friends and family is a better way to remain healthy.
Which opinion do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your essay. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use
memorized examples.
Societies have many ideas on whether we should have good diet and exercise or positive relationship. In my point of view, having a positive relationship is the best way to have a healthy life long. I will explore that with you in the following essay.
First of all, having a good relationship with friends and family is a really effective way to have healthy life reduces life stress and depression. Take my experience as a good example of that, two weeks ago I had Toefl test and I have studied really hard to get the score I dreamed of, but life is won’t get easy on you so I hadn’t get the mark I wished, so I was in a really bad shape, but my friends and family was their for me, they really made me feal much better and encouraged me to study harder for the next time. So for that part mentioned above, I really don’t anything would have made me feel better than having positive relationships.
Moreover, having good friends will make life easier since they will be on your back when ever you need them, that means if you get yourself in a trouble they will lend you their hand. For instance, last year when I was in my last year in school, I got myself in to a big trouble with my teacher, I was about to be separated of school because I raised my voice in my teacher but I got through it. To conclude this part, even if you got yourself in to troubles, friends will help you pass through it even if they couldn’t stop it from happening.
To sum up, having positive relationships will lead to having a less stress and depression, and having an easier life over all. So for the earlier statement, I think it’s not true but not false either, and I suggest everyone to build up their relationships because it also leads to a aging more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, for instance, i think, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21580547112 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35402043726 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477203647416 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 329.0 20.1344086022 1634% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1387.0 100.406767564 1381% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 329.0 20.6045352989 1597% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 90.0 5.45110844103 1651% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0924985841755 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924985841755 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643319730757 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216218445116 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 162.9 11.7677419355 1384% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -237.08 58.1214874552 -408% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 128.1 10.1575268817 1261% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.68 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.49 8.01818996416 268% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 32.0 86.8835125448 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 10.002688172 540% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 133.6 10.0537634409 1329% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 134.0 10.247311828 1308% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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