Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generations.
Life today is more comfortable and convenient than ever. Modern society has produced some amazing
innovations that have radically transformed our daily habits and intimate relationships. However, many
are concerned that the way we live now will have a negative impact on future generations. I totally agree.
Our current behavior will definitely hurt future societies because we waste too many resources and use
too much energy.
Humans are producing more garbage than ever. Every year the rate of waste increases as the population
continues to expand. And much of this garbage isn't recyclable. A few years back, I was living in New York
City. I was surprised to see garbage cans on almost every street corner that were constantly filled to the
brim. My own small apartment building, with only ten apartments, had over a hundred bags of garbage by
the end of every week. And I'm just as guilty of waste as everyone else. I filled up a whole garbage can with
random junk almost every day. There is so much waste that could be easily avoided. We could be using
washable towels, instead of paper towels, portable mugs, instead of disposable coffee cups, just to name a
few. I fear that humans in the future will have to pay for the waste we are creating today.
Not only does the amount of waste we currently generate harm to the environment, but so does the
energy we consume. We still rely on fossil fuels to power our cars and heat our homes. The electric
companies that supply citizens with the energy needed to live still use coal and natural gas. Every day we
are pumping an enormous amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere, speeding up the rate of global
warming. However, few people have changed, including me. In the summertime, I have the air conditioner
on at the highest possible setting. In the winter, I make sure every room in the house is warm. Every day I
burn fossil fuels and contribute to the pollution problem. I enjoy a comfortable modern life filled with
convenience, but hardly ever consider how these decisions may harm others in the future.
While it's true that life today is more comfortable than ever, I believe our current habits will have a
negative impact on the future. The massive amount of garbage and fossil fuels we consume and waste is
already contributing to climate change. We must make better decisions about waste and energy today, to
ensure a better tomorrow.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...nues to expand And much of this garbage isnt recyclable A few years back I was livin...
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Line 10, column 27, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...f garbage by the end of every week And Im just as guilty of waste as everyone els...
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Line 18, column 61, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...people have changed including me In the summertime I have the air conditioner on at the h...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76498800959 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42561887184 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52278177458 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 417.0 20.1344086022 2071% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1987.0 100.406767564 1979% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 417.0 20.6045352989 2024% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 39.0 5.45110844103 715% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.53405017921 529% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212940343058 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212940343058 0.076458572812 279% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617325283418 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830565097498 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 209.5 11.7677419355 1780% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -351.78 58.1214874552 -605% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 165.9 10.1575268817 1633% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.81 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 27.61 8.01818996416 344% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 10.002688172 590% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 168.8 10.0537634409 1679% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.