If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
If I have chance to change one thing about my hometown , I would to change public transportation in my hometown. I am going to explain why I want to change public transportation with three different kind of reasons.
Firstly, public transportation has great value to every town or city in the world because it is prove that avaliable everywhere for people. However, In my hometown has bad public transportation even my hometown very crowded place. I am living in Istanbul city and this city population has more than fourteen million, but even this population it has not great transportation. This situation gives that bad effect on every citizen who are living in Istanbul city. In my opinion, govenment has take care of subway beacuse it is the best to fix that problem.
Secondly, Istanbul city is not offer to cheap ticket for their citizen and I believe that if train will be change by government, citizen has great oppurnitiy form it. And citizen of Istanbul city could save their money to travel in every part of the Istanbul city. For example, I use to rainway everyday to get my campus. However this process does not easy to me beacuse there is a not new kind of train and it is not provide confort and also it cause of high ticket price beacuse old type of rain costum much more energy than new one. In this reason I want to change rainway system in my country.
Thirtly, Istanbul city has lots of traffic jam, and this jam could be eleminated by subway. But Istanbul city was not created subway by government. And if I have authority about that area, I will immediatly change this circumstance in Istanbul city. Beacuse people can not get somewhere beacuse of traffic who are living in this city. For intance, I meet with my friend at Taksim Square which is the center of the city, but despite it is center of city there is a not enough subway to get there. And I have always be late for meet with my friends.
In the conclusion, I want to chance public transportation in terms of travel with pleasure, travel cheaply and get on time. Especially I want to change subway in my hometown beacuse of all these reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ce to change one thing about my hometown , I would to change public transportation...
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Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kind' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kinds'.
Suggestion: kinds
...lic transportation with three different kind of reasons. Firstly, public transport...
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Line 2, column 98, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'proved', 'proven'.
Suggestion: proved; proven
...town or city in the world because it is prove that avaliable everywhere for people. H...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...bul city. For example, I use to rainway everyday to get my campus. However this process ...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e to rainway everyday to get my campus. However this process does not easy to me beacus...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...s a not new kind of train and it is not provide confort and also it cause of high ticke...
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Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...d it is not provide confort and also it cause of high ticket price beacuse old type o...
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Line 4, column 515, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... subway to get there. And I have always be late for meet with my friends. In the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in terms of travel with pleasure, travel cheaply and get on time. Especially I wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58530183727 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6111184338 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448818897638 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8226652731 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.35 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116169966241 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438789672905 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678282681203 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866155795813 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744056670416 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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