If you could go back to some time and place in the past, when and where would you go? Why?
Most of people have a lot of places where they wish to come back for many reasons. Specifically, those places could b cities or countries where people grew up or had some memories such as holidays, travels, or jobs. In my case, if I were to choose one, I would like to come back to Italy. I made a PhD in Italy, and I have greats remembers when I was there, which I will develop in the following paragraphs.
First of all, friends are one of the most important things that anyone could have an anyplace. So, when people want to return to some place in most of cases it is because they left or miss some old friend. Drawing my own experience, I made a lot in Italy, and I love to see them again if it could be possible. Not only we spent time together, but also we studied at the same group of research.
Second, Italy has so many things to visit around such us cities, little towns, mountains, rivers, and endless places. Furthermore, I left in love when I went to Venezia. In my point of view, it is the best city in the word. Venezia has all that you want, restaurants, churches, and the best tour that you can do on gondolas. It is amazing go around the city through those little river allies.
Finally, Italy, although has a sharp climate in each season, I enjoyed every day. For example, there are some sky centers, and at the beginning of winter, I love went there with friend to spend all day doing snowboard with them. Furthermore, in the summer on the other side of Italy there is the sea, where are beautiful beaches, and places to camp. It was other places where I miss to go.
In conclusion, eventually Italy is the place that I would to came back because, I left a lot of friends, it has many places to visit, and the seasons are wonderful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
Most of people have a lot of places where they wish to...
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Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...important things that anyone could have an anyplace. So, when people want to return to some...
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Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the cases') or simply say ''most cases''.
Suggestion: most of the cases; most cases
... people want to return to some place in most of cases it is because they left or miss some ol...
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Line 4, column 380, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'miss going', 'miss gonna'.
Suggestion: miss going; miss gonna
...es to camp. It was other places where I miss to go. In conclusion, eventually Italy is t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30120481928 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37938081044 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542168674699 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7576209209 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282586821693 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074882282651 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627971028118 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134717315003 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187664346221 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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