If you need to take a course, which professor's course would you like to take?
• A professor who was voted the most popular
• A professor who has just won an award for an outstanding research
In today's modern and sophisticated world, professors play vital roles in educational systems. In this connection, professors have several features, and students can consider them to take a course. Although contested by many that the matter of winning an award for outstanding research is highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded as both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I concur with the notion that it is helpful for students to enroll in the classes which are taught by the most popular tutors, and I will analyze my reasons throughout this essay.
First, the professor who is voted the most renowned is efficient in students' learning, so learners should take a course in their classes. To be more specific, because this professor is well-known, his courses' materials are available for students, and they can gain information about his teaching methods from other students who had classes with him. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I attended a class with a famous teacher. Since the professor was popular, all students in a dormitory known him, and informed me about the materials which were important for exams. After reading the popular sources, I passed my exam wonderfully because they were relevant to the exam's problems.
Second, it is an ideal opportunity for students who participate in popular professors' classes to have a great resume. To elucidate, in addition to educational systems, popular teachers are known in industrial systems; thus, students who had a class with them can apply for vacancies readily. For example, after I graduated from university, I applied for several careers. During interviews, they asked about professors with whom I took classes. When I realized an essential role of professors to find an appropriate job, I asked my popular tutors to write a recommendation for me. As a result, I hired a profitable company with the aid of that recommendation.
To conclude, while there are several arguments on each side, I profoundly believe that take a course with the professor who is voted the most popular can be a plus. Not only do students in renowned teachers' classes access to innumerable materials, but they also can get benefits from their popular teachers in applying for a job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...popular teachers in applying for a job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13066666667 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96438833863 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8857821593 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.176470588 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338822950879 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114212304495 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842545764572 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220627099658 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011432102486 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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