Imagine that your city government has given permission for a major company to build a large factory near your neighborhood. Do you think this is a good idea? Why or why not? Explain your position using specific reasons and examples.
No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the importance of implementing factories in our societies. there are lots of people who are inclined toward the opinion that a country’s prosperity is based on the number of factories which it has. However, in my opinion, these factories should be located in an appropriate location. If my city government decides to give permission for a major company to build a large factory in my neighborhood, I would definitely disagree with that. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will elaborate on the reasons substantiating my point of view.
To begin with, people who live in a city should have clean air; however, locating a factory near a neighborhood can cause air pollution. Accordingly, people can not enjoy living in pleasant weather. My personal experience is a compelling example of this issue. Many years ago, I lived in a city which had a great mayor. He had done so much in order to keep the weather clean; Therefore, we all loved the city. But then, an automobile company decided to build a factory in the neighborhood. Consequently, people started to leave the town gradually. After a while, there was not a city anymore.
Another equally important reason which I think deserves some words is that by implementing a factory, the city has no more its quietness. All the factories make enormous sounds. People need some time to relax; however, they can not enjoy their time after building such factories. Consequently, they may leave the city and find a new neighborhood in order to have a pleasant time with their family.
Furthermore, such factories need many workers, which means that there should be lots of people in order to run the factory. Therefore, it may implement lots of traffics. People usually avoid crowded neighborhoods. As a result, it would not be a perfect place to leave anymore. Imagine the people who live in the neighborhood. Every morning they want to go to their workplace, but with a factory around their neighborhood, they would have difficulty to reach their destination because of the crowdedness which the workers make.
considering all the reasons mentioned above, one could conclude that building a factory near a neighborhood is not a good idea because it causes air pollution and lots of annoying sounds. Furthermore, it may cause traffics in the neighborhood because of all the workers that a factory needs in order to be ran
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, i think, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94088669951 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98731006955 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495073891626 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8213520546 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.24 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.24 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160545949155 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452938841656 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519139051736 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974501335832 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034146580405 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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