To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.
Nowadays, education is an indispensable part of our life, thereby, it has many influences on an individual’s life. some individuals may ask, what makes education better? some people argue that to improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors. While others disagree. Both sides of the arguments have considerable reasons for supporting their claims. However, I do believe the latter side is true because of two important reasons.
First and foremost, today's, universities need more equipment in their laboratory or books in their libraries in order to be an efficient university. The equipment or books which are updated and also they have easy access for all students. For instance, I studied mechanical engineering, when I was a college student, I need some especial tools in order to do my master project. And fortunately my university updated equipment every six months so I was able to do the project. furthermore, updated books and equipment motivate students to work better and be aware of new technologies around the world, Therefore, they are able to learn better and have a deep understanding of their fields. As you see, universities should spend more money on books and equipment rather than salaries for professors with an eye to increase the quality of education.
Last but not least, universities by spending money on international students not only does it improve the quality of education but also they can attract top students from all around the world. furthermore, attracting international students can be a way to have better communication between universities, thus universities have more researches and projects in common which can result in improving the knowledge of students and professors. In addition, universities can invest money in research projects with the purpose of inventing and exploring new things.
In a nutshell, for the reasons I have mentioned, I disagree with the following statement that in order to have a better education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors. I suggest to all dean’s universities to invest money in things which can increase students’ knowledge such as holding workshops in various fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4338028169 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18972761058 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504225352113 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6120541981 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.470588235 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457059685394 0.236089414692 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1578922571 0.076458572812 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.224321436125 0.0737576698707 304% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31246919632 0.150856017488 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824582729056 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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