It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.
it is critically important for people to choose a proper In my opinion, it's better to have a career similar to a parents'. I feel this way for two compelling reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, you can use your parents' experience. when you and your parents work in the same workplace, they can help you more than strangers. they know you better than other people; as a result, he or she can help you to get promotions sooner. A vivid example that can shed light on this subject was my experience when I attained to a company, which my father has worked there since he graduated from university, as an internship. In the first month, my boss gave me a project, so when I asked my father's help, he made an excuse that he had a job to do. he suggested me to got help from his friends, so his friend came and helped me. even though he has been working there for eight years and was good at his work, he couldn't help me with my projects. after that, I asked my father for help. because of being familiar with me and my character, he explained my flaws and
showed
my mistakes in that project. after that project, my boss offered me a job in the engineering department of the company.based on my example, my father helped me do the first project well and get a job.
Furthermore, you are familiar with the workplace. it is essential to know about your workplace atmosphere and your co-worker character, but it would take time to become familiar with the workplace. when your parents worked in a place, you know all of their co-workers. it is because your parents talk about them at home, and you know them well. For instance, in my internship, I know my boss's attitude. I spoke to him about sport; because I knew he watches the game match which TV
shows
. I knew that he like chocolate cake, so I bought a chocolate cake every Monday to make him feel that I am a good friend for him at the workplace. I knew that he hates to be late at work, so I tried to be on time to
show
him that I am an on-time employee, even though I wasn't an on-time-person before my internship. I knew all his interest based on my father's stories about his work. If I didn't know him, I wouldn't get that job.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it's good to have a similar job as parents'. this is because you can get help from your parents and you know the workplace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, you know, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 107.0 43.0788530466 248% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31180400891 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54167826348 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45434298441 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 29.0 9.59856630824 302% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2158107473 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6666666667 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7083333333 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29166666667 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148963965027 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513565409822 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526427661687 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865877497932 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480803678417 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.