It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
I think for children living in a big city is a better than live in the countryside. Despite all the disadvantages of a big city that make countryside better place for living, they have lots of facilities that make our lives better and easier. For example, in a city someone can access to hospitals, banks, shopping centers and entertainment facilities which are really rare in a countryside.
Living in a countryside has lots of advantages. The most important advantages of living in a countryside that are not found in big cities are its fresh and healthy air and food which are really important for a child. There are peace and quiet places which everyone feel happy and cheerful there. The people are warm-hearted, friendly, hospitable and they have simple life style. People in these small areas try to live happily and have a simple life style. They spend a lot of time to speak with their children and tell them about their experiences. But in big cities people live in a polluted area which always have air pollution and heavy traffics where people spend most of their time in traffic jams which make them really tired and angry. People in cities have hectic life style and they do not have enough time to spend for their children and their children spend most of their childhood on preschools where someone else show them the best way of living.
Although big cities have lots of amenities such as hospitals, banks, shopping centers, best schools with enough facilities, lots of recreational areas, etc. The most important thing is that in cities people have access to hospitals and health care products. If their children has any health problem, they can take them to the hospital as soon as possible whereas there are many children in the country that are maimed, have asthma or have many other health problems because their parents did not have access to hospitals when their children needed. Also, another important advantage of living in a town is that children can study in good schools and after graduating from school or university there is abundant job opportunities for them. They can easily find a job and start to live on their own.
All in all, I think living in a big city has lots of advantages that worth to live there with all the disadvantages that it bring for people’s life. I think children who live in a big city can be more successful than children who live in the country.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'whereas', 'for example', 'i think', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262582056893 0.229887763892 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.142231947484 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105032822757 0.0866891130778 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0415754923414 0.046263068375 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0590809628009 0.0685040099705 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129102844639 0.118717715034 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0175054704595 0.0351676179071 50% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.54885484046 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.019693654267 0.0309702414327 64% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0656455142232 0.0887237588012 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0109409190372 0.0209618222197 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0328227571116 0.0139019557991 236% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2412.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 420.0 408.028673835 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74285714286 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.304761904762 0.338922669872 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.195238095238 0.251872472559 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15 0.174417080927 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0904761904762 0.112833075102 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54885484046 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.524397521467 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.0141078752 59.2087087015 78% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.3333333333 20.5533526081 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0172467052 48.84282405 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 120.699889404 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.5533526081 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 42.8571428571 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.68468468468 1.45489161554 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331073608384 0.300154397459 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.17677428349 0.103427244359 171% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0915410970754 0.0752933317313 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.52299735491 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150033925161 0.151897553556 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147308550304 0.114077575197 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084918098769 0.0781384742642 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.361449918949 0.336927656856 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0734247010531 0.067059652881 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261736393302 0.210909579961 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586465716688 0.0618886996521 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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