It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects to specialize in one specific subject.
There is no denial to the fact that people will have wide range of opinions and contrasting views on whether it is better to have a broad knolwedge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. Well, as far as my opinion is concerned, I would definitely like to specialize in one specific subject. My opinion in this regard is a deduction of life lessons and personal examples which I shall elucidate in the following passages.
To start with, I firmly believe that in the modern world of rapidly evolving technologies, it is of utmost importance to dig deeper into the intricacies of a particular subject. The industrial requirements expect an individual to be a thorough expert of their assigned job role. Speaking from my personal experience, I have learned that the best way to excel in career is through becoming the master of a specific trade. Being a data analyst, my daily job is to deal with data through data cleaning, analysis, simulation and many more. I receive high payoffs from my work through delivering strcitly in accordance to my domain. However, I am never expected to showcase my knowhow of literary arts or history. Thus, there is really not much use of possesing a broad knowledge of many academic subjects.
Secondly, people must objectively focus really on something that they enjoy the most. Yes, a basic level of knowledge on a variety of knowledge would never hurt anyone. But, one must essentially remember that we are bound by time constraints in this fast paced world. Thus, the time allocated for learning and specialization should essentially be directed to something one takes interest in and wants to pursue in future. As I have learned from my own life, I had wasted a lot of time in my early life, mugging up chunks of information that were of no use once I joined the work force. Hence, carefully devoting time to a field of specialization is a wise decision.
Finally, people must really acquire knowledge in one specific subject that they know would help them in future. As it had happened to me, I was interested in coding since my childhood and had my goals clear to become a programmer. As a result, I devoted all my time during undergraduation learning all possible nuances in coding. As an outcome, I bagged a very satisfactory job once I graduated. On the other side, I had seen my friends take up classes on a huge spectrum of specializations ranging from politics to social sciences. Surely they have a lot more knowledge than me in absolute terms. However, relative to today's situation they had a really hard time being placed.
In conclusion, I would like to state that as per my opinion, pertaining to the applicability in modern world, being an expert in a particular field is more prefarable than having a braod knowledge of many academic subjects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... subject that they know would help them in future. As it had happened to me, I was intere...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...earning all possible nuances in coding. As an outcome, I bagged a very satisfactor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2350.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81557377049 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89607401361 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516393442623 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 770.4 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7677026375 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9166666667 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313819468612 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821135920929 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122143435724 0.0737576698707 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189246692414 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131419930629 0.0645574589148 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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