It is better for people to choose jobs that come with high salaries even though they do not enjoy doing it than to choose jobs that they enjoy but come with low salaries.
Use specific reasons and examples
There is no doubt that people needs to work, either they enjoy it or not, because the live is too expensive nowadays and you need the money to survive. In my opinion when it comes to job and salary I would say having a higher salary will be better than a low pay with more joy. I think this way for some reasons that I will elaborate in this essay.
To began with, having a job is the minimum requirment for everyone to survive. Finding a job with higher pay is one of the best luck you can have. I say this because if you have money enough to pay your bills and go in vacation at least once per year you will be happy. And being happy is a good luck. Not everyone have it. For example, my brother wanted to be a teacher. And he finished the school for that, but back in my country which is Macedonia teachers do not have a good salary. So, even though he was enjoyng the job he was not happy because the money he was getting were not enough to cover his expenses. Thus, he needed to change the job. He got hired in a private company where he was doing constructions work. He worked as roofing technician, and was making more money, since ever he is more happy because he can pay all of his bills and still has money for some fun.
Also, if you have a job that pays you better, it can be more healthy. I say this based on my own experience. When I first came in United States I found a job as stocker in a groccery store. The pay was not enough for me to pay for the rent and other things I needed to live. So, it was so stresful situations, espacially when it was the time to pay the rent. I started to feel so unhappy and depressed. One day I had to go to emergency room because of the high stress. And all of this was due to low salary. Then, I changed the job, I got hired as pharmacy technician at Unitedhelthare an insurance company where the salary is much better and this helped me to be myself again. I am still there, even though I do not enjoy the job that much I am heappy and healthy, no more stress about the money.
Finally, if you have a good pay, you can always be more valuable for the society. You can help people in need by making donations. For instance, one of my friends is a nurse. She is making decent incomes. She is also part of an non profit assotiation where they are helping people in need, like people that are sick or homeless. She is collecting founds for them to pay for their medication and also pay for their rents or in some casses they are boulding or buying houses for those people. And she not just colecting money, but she is also one of the biggest investitors in there.
To sum up, the slalary pays a significant role in our lives and it is the one who makes us happy, wealthy, healthy and helpful for others. So, do a job that can be worth for you and for others around you. Always be happy and helpful for people who need your help.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ing decent incomes. She is also part of an non profit assotiation where they are h...
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Line 4, column 330, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... like people that are sick or homeless. She is collecting founds for them to pay fo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for them to pay for their medication and also pay for their rents or in some cass...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: Be Always
...rth for you and for others around you. Always be happy and helpful for people who need y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, still, then, thus, at least, for example, for instance, i think, no doubt, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 15.1003584229 238% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2316.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 566.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09187279152 4.8611393121 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87757670434 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19965444817 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452296819788 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.0 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8393388669 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1176470588 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215309445517 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546284731245 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573644378071 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140952442629 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06760704942 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 11.7677419355 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.15 10.9000537634 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... I think this way for some reasons that I will elaborate in this essay. To be...
^^
Line 1, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for some reasons that I will elaborate in this essay. To began with, having a...
^^
Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ing decent incomes. She is also part of an non profit assotiation where they are h...
^^
Line 4, column 330, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... like people that are sick or homeless. She is collecting founds for them to pay fo...
^^^
Line 4, column 395, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for them to pay for their medication and also pay for their rents or in some cass...
^^
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: Be Always
...rth for you and for others around you. Always be happy and helpful for people who need y...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, still, then, thus, at least, for example, for instance, i think, no doubt, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 15.1003584229 238% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2316.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 566.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09187279152 4.8611393121 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87757670434 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19965444817 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452296819788 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.0 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8393388669 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1176470588 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215309445517 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546284731245 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573644378071 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140952442629 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06760704942 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 11.7677419355 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.15 10.9000537634 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.