Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my opinion, sports and social activities have a significant role in our lives. No doubt that universities should allocate a financial support for those activities.
First, playing sports would help us to stay healthy physically as well as mentally. It is well known that running for at least 30 minutes two times a week, will regulate our body and brain functions. It helps us to keep our blood pressure on its normal range, have control in our body weight and lower the blood sugar and blood fat. For example, my uncle was a professor for physics education in high school. Because of the job he was doing he was required to play different sports for many years. Now, he is seventy years old and he is in very good shape and a wealthy person. Compare to his friends, that worked in offices and had a passive live in physically aspect, he has no high blood sugar, no heart disease and its very active person.
On the other hand, practicing sports helps people to be healthy mentally. It is a good way to release the stress also to feed our brain with oxygen witch helps us to finish our everyday life activities. For instance, when I need to finish any school project that requires high concentration, I always go to the school gym to take a walk because it helps me a lot to be focused on my tasks.
Furthermore, social activities are very important for the students because they helps them to open the mind to express their thoughts, feelings or opinions in their school projects especially. When they need to work together on something they can easily share their ideas and learn from each others if they are well socialized and associated. The other day, we had to work on a school project, when we needed to talk about different holiday traditions. We worked as a group and everyone was giving their examples of what they are doing with their families for every holiday they celebrate. It would not have been done if we were very shy and not socialized in a proper way. We shared our ideas together and the project was one of the best in our school and we won a prize what was a trip to England. That made us very happy and we were very thankful to our university that gave us the opportunity to be part of the social activities.
In summary, I would say that universities should have available a budget for everything that is worth for the new generations to grow healthy and smart
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51612903226 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5046029956 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502304147465 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.390211596 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954056196378 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347583074678 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405710068503 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720449285498 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644818791169 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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