It is commonly believed that in life success is not the most important thing It is more important to remain happy and optimistic when we fail Do you agree with this idea
It is critically important that we enjoy life and maintain our sanity regardless of circumstances that we may fibd ourselves in. Personally, I believe that achieving our life goals is vital and most important to make us remain joyful. There are two reasons why I feel this way which I would explore in the following essay.
To begin with, when a student is successful in his academics, he becomes glad, automatically strengthened to ascend greater heights, and even dare the impossible. My personal experience is a compelling example to illustrate this point. During my final year of studying Mining Engineering in the University, I applied for an undergraduate scholarship that would fully sponsor my studies. I had always wanted to study on scholarship because of my academic prowess and due to my poor financial background. When I was finally pronunced as one of the recipients of the Federal Government Scholarship, I became very elated and enthusiastic to even put more efforts in my academics. In contrast to my previous attempts to win the sponsorship. I would feel so downcast after several rejections since my first year in the school.
Furthermore, becoming successful in our endeavors can bring us to a position of honor even at our place of work. But when there is no record of success in pursuit of our life goals, soon we become sad and worn-out because not everyone knows how to handle failure. For instance, three years back, I worked as a site Engineer in a construction company in Port Harcourt, Nigeria. After several years of serving the company meritoriously, I thought to myself that I deserved to be promoted so I wrote a letter to the company's management to call their attention. It only not took a few days before my letter was treated and my promotion approved. This was strictly because of my track records of success in several projects that were anchored by the company which I supervised. Meanwhile, there was a colleague named John, who we started work in thesame year. He could have also been promoted. However, his promotion was denied because he had not successfully completed any project assigned to his care by the company's management. For John, he found life fulfilment and joy in his work rather than in any other thing. So, after being denied of promotion severally, remaining happy and optimistic was not an option for him. John became enervated and sad that he eventually resigned work. This example clearly demonstrate how success is mostly important in our day-to-day activities.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that becoming successful is mostly important in life. This is because success will eventually give us joy, strength to attain greater heights, and bring us to a position of honor.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, thus, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2289.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99781659389 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94662526396 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552401746725 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1231227886 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.56 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.32 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209362959207 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05920024103 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745814566039 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150948362197 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673230602921 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.