It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I do not support building a new restaurant in my neighborhood. People choose residential areas distant to the market area and if a restaurant opens there then it affects our life in several ways. Some of the major reasons discuss in following paragraphs.
First, building a new restaurant will increase traffic in residential areas and also parking of vehicles in front of houses will disturb residential. For instance, last summer a barbecue food truck came into our society parking every evening. Few days we enjoyed the food and aroma of grilling food but after a week people from outside entered society for food truck. It made our residency cluttered with vehicles and people from outside park in open parking area of society which is a big problem.
Second, people from other sides of the city come to restaurants for food and party which increases the number of unknown people around my neighborhood. The society will not be more safe. As I mentioned above because of food availability homeless people also entered society and sometimes they took bicycles and other stuff also. This is not a good plan to open a restaurant in the neighborhood.
Third, I like to live in a calm and peaceful area and a food chain is open then the calmness will be dissolved with a crowd. Today , usually people want to buy a home a little far from the city crowd and this plan will destroy the peace of the society. However, some people argue that it is a good plan because for restaurants we could not drive far. It is not true because people do not eat daily in restaurants and for once in a while most people prefer to drive a little far and enjoy dinner with family.
Conclusively, there are some more reasons behind disagreeing with the plan of opening a restaurant in my neighborhood. I like to drive downtown and enjoy food and ambiance on some special nights but I would not like building a restaurant near my house or society.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...en it affects our life in several ways. Some of the major reasons discuss in following para...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...imes they took bicycles and other stuff also. This is not a good plan to open a rest...
^^^^
Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ss will be dissolved with a crowd. Today , usually people want to buy a home a lit...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, third, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71091445428 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6308967382 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483775811209 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2166682458 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9411764706 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120913022858 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592293064182 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753760074793 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847515696182 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451157970418 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...en it affects our life in several ways. Some of the major reasons discuss in following para...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...imes they took bicycles and other stuff also. This is not a good plan to open a rest...
^^^^
Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ss will be dissolved with a crowd. Today , usually people want to buy a home a lit...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, third, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71091445428 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6308967382 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483775811209 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2166682458 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9411764706 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120913022858 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592293064182 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753760074793 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847515696182 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451157970418 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.