It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
The exponential growth of technology and the transportation has shrunk the whole world as the events around the nook and corner of the world can easily be accessed from home. However, it brings up a controversial debate whether it is important to know all the events happening around the world even though it is of trivial importance or if it is a waste of time. I strongly believe that knowing the current events of the world is of utmost importance which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, the growing competition urges everyone to know the current affairs in finger tips, without which the person remains ignorant of many things. That is why, for some people watching the news channel is as important as having their food. With the help of growing technology, we can watch the live events from various parts of the world. This enlighten us by unveiling lot of new things and keep us updated. For example, various celebrations and sports activities which are broadcasted live not only entertain us but also provide us enough information.
Besides, the political changes happening around the world can not be neglected as it has significant impact on the economy of other countries. For example, subsequent to the United States presidential elections lot of economic changes happened. Recently, there were tax reforms of export goods from China to the US and vice versa. This in turn shook the economy across the globe because of which there were lot of inflation and tax reforms. How can someone be ignorant of what is happening in Syria? Even though these events may not be useful to us in our daily events, we cannot pay a deaf ear to the worldly events. Knowing the different culture, climatic changes, laws and regulations are extremely important before planning a visit to that region.
Admittedly, the media projects the same news again and again, constantly watching the world events without doing the daily duties is also not a righteous thing. One should know the limitation of what is required and what not. Spending enormous hours in social media and surfing all the worldly news whole day long is not gonna fetch anything.
To conclude, I would like to emphasize that knowing quintessential events across the globe is of utmost importance in the current scenario where the competition for jobs is huge. This not only broadens our knowledge but also gives good experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9484029484 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64383283067 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530712530713 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8590722998 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.7 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.35 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263477518443 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726542604249 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775169386745 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147221563979 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103866552922 0.0645574589148 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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