It is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Numerous events happening around the world everyday and most of them seems far away from our lives. So whether we should know about them, ideas vary. Some hold that people should value their time and ignore irrelevant information; while some others believe that people should pay more attention and learn from all those events. From my perspective, being aware of what is happening around us is important which also benefits us in some aspects.
First of all, learning from events will help us make wise decisions. It is an information era, thus the more information we have, the more power we own. As we all know about the butterfly effect that slight change might cause huge difference, so does the events. Therefore when the undergraduate student chooses the specialty, a new discovery in Mayan city might him or her to archaeology; when a stock operator analyse the volatility of price, an international company went public might change his mind to sell off all shares. With the understanding of what is happening outside, we will have a grasp of the current trend and therefore make correct and wise decisions.
Furthermore, some events happened other places might not affect us immediately, however, it is most likely to exert certain influence in the near future. Pay attention to this kind of events will prepare us for accidents. Such events as flood early warning and terrorist prewarning will alarm normal citizens to equip themselves and seek for refugr. So when accidents arrive, it might be the key point to save our lifes.
While it is undeniable that learning about all the events is quite time-consuming, but we need not worry about this anymore. With the evolvement of informational application, the process of accessing events is more efficient and effective than before. Users can quickly follow the trending topic in social media and understand the whole story in the first time.
In conclusion, with the knowledge of current events, we can keep abreast with the time. Despite we might be busy with our daily routines, we still should follow the current news, because it will help us make wiser decisions and perpare ourselves from unknown dangers in advance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04132231405 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65302844012 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9503813335 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174502428204 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579944598602 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478449720365 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934766439638 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381990236152 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.