It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
There is no doubt that towadays, any events happening in the world play crucial role in people’s lives. No one can deny the influential of phenomena in the world in daily lives. A controversial question arise about this issue why people must know about this? Some people have this idea that knowing about any events in the world are more useful; however, some belief that the people can overlook about this events, I subscribe first idea and explain about with my reasons hereunder.
Fisrt, in the contemporary, by improving technology and knowledge of mankind about consuming fuel, environment might be more dangerd with using resourses of earth deramatically. By doing so, everyone can know about this issue, which do not arise problem for people and easily ignoring about the massive and huge issue. With this regard, every people are trying to acquire any information and with this data is informed other people in the world can do a impressive work as manager for the earth. When people being more unify, every problem in the massive scale can be solved only with collaboration each other to get a clean earth as soon as.
Another reasons, every phenomena can affect on events which the people they no relation in between them. For example, the price of oil in the world is affected with the lot of factors such charactrestic of oil, politces, and even wars. Every people in the world thinks no relation between them; therefor, knowing about that are helped people how confronting with the changing price of oil in the world
All in all, knowing about phenomena not only help people to how managing any changing in the world, but also they can be more unify as consistent group to acquire a clean environment in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85234899329 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50430915503 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510067114094 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.6697729837 48.9658058833 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.454545455 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195774859211 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879724045975 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046062816195 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133688394111 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551563170533 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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