Is it as important for older people to learn and study new things as young people to do so?
It is widely acknowledged that learning new things does not take roles in the old’s life as big as that of the young’s. However, I firmly believe that learning new things is always meaningful in every generation. I hold this opinion for several reasons which are the self-improvement, discoveries of new interests, and the enhanced connections between different ages.
To begin with, learning new skills or knowledges is responsible for the old to become more confident through making self-improvements. Usually, the young study for getting better careers to survive in the societies, but not for getting pure improvements that possibly are irrelevant to their practical aims. The old, however, are not putting the study that is accompanied with practical aim in the top priority. Instead, they are seeking for self-improvement. For instance, my grandmother had started gardening several years ago responding her curiosity toward benefits of organic food on her body. Through learning nutrition and chemical properties of different types of soils or fertilizers, she became more confident about maintaining health through diets. This demonstrates that studying about one’s purely interested field actually benefits them, especially for the old.
In addition, expanding one’s mind field by learning new things allows them to have wider genres their interests point at. Since every academic field is corresponding each other, learning one kind of things enhance the chance to learn about other fields. In my grandmother’s case, studying food nutrition in detail exposed her into biological field, that is, she started to learn more about genetics by following her questions about genetically modified food crops. Her curiosity is not limited in food area anymore; instead, she is passionate about learning more about the mystery of genetics, which is becoming her motivation toward life.
Furthermore, studying equips individuals with knowledges that help the old to communicate with others in the societies, thus creating stronger relationships with the communities they are belonging in. The young usually struggle to communicate with the old since the generation gap between them are hard to be ignored by the young in trends. On the other hand, if they have common topic to talk about, their communication will become more smooth. And this might be achieved by the old who are willing to study about new culture and, at the same time, hopeful about teaching next generations about traditional cultures they are professional at. Take my teacher as an example. He is keen on jazz music, however his students are fond of listening popular music more than jazz music. In order to know why this tendency occurs, he started to listen to pops and read many books explaining the shift of people’s music preferences. Then he had many conversations about music with his students, consequently succeeded in introducing great jazz pieces and getting information of popular music the young are favoring at.
In conclusion, although it is undeniable that studying is relatively more time-worthy for the young compared to the old, the benefits individuals gain from studying is priceless throughout one’s life, regardless of the age he or she begins to do so.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb belong is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'belong'
Suggestion: belong
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Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...relationships with the communities they are belonging in. The young usually struggle to commu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2754.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 513.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36842105263 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97833041601 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534113060429 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 839.7 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9136115708 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.739130435 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3043478261 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69565217391 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244185134993 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689936747241 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523201564021 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147058677311 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484020381409 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 86.8835125448 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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