Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position
As it is mentioned it is true that people have diffrent prespects of a view. And both is valuable due to it is a personal decision of how to live and every person has a equal right with others to have it's own choices. But as comperation they both have controversial positions.
Earning a huge amount of money means that you can easily reach out all the dreams and things that you wish for. But there is a price that should be paid for this and it is the time and dedicatement that you need have upon your job. For instance for running a big company you need to be enough educated, motivated, and wise to know and ensure that the best decision is the one you're making. which is gained by time. But most importantly the responsibility and the anxiety of these kind of jobs affects our life more than we think.
in the other hand some think just having enough money to enjoy a good quality of life is satisfing and it isn't nessecery to be the best in every thing.They believe that there are lots of things to enjoy in the way of success than at the end. In some points this is a fact that an be rational as if we don't live for ever and every thing say death is possible. In addition enjoying every single moment with a middle range salary is something lots of people prefer.
in conclusion I may say a a matter of argument we can't decide which of these statements are the correct one and deny the other. I think both of them are true but as mentioned above each of them has advantages and disadvantages. But my personal opinion is to both enjoy and have more efferts to get more money and this way of thinking is in the addition of our inner instinct of perfectionist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26498422713 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43321363942 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514195583596 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3889188596 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111377862771 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359689837462 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263127260593 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613547501419 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304740714657 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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