The most important investment of a company is to improve the skills of its employees. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Decreasing the expenditure and increasing the income are crucial and fundamental elements which companies are supposed to consider. How to optimize the money the company has to gain the most profit becomes increasingly significant. Some people hold that the most important investment of a company is to improve the skills of its employees. However, from my perspective, I disagree with this statement.
Admittedly, improving the skill of the employees is of importance in a high-tech company. To be more concrete, high-tech company needs the new ideas and skills to invent more new products in the modern society. Such as a smartphone company. The competition of smartphone in the market is very fierce. Every company is compelled to give more user-friendly application service and swift updates. How to make the system more convenient to the consumers; how to make the appearance more appealing to the customers? These issues are exposed to the smartphone company. Therefore improving the skill of employees is a proper choice sometimes.
However, choosing a good location is more of significance than improving the employee's skills for a industrial company which does not demand high technologies. To be more specific, the industrial company needs much transportation back and forth with other places such as raw material companies and market and so on. A a good location which is near to these spots can save much money and time on the transportation. If the industrial company build in a desolate place, the company need to go farther, which can cause a huge strain on the budget in the long term.
Furthermore, having an attractive advertisement is more of importance than improving the employee's skills for a clothing company. This is because clothing company also does not need a high technology, and the clothes are produced by the pipeline from a model. A kind of clothes whose design is mediocre can be sold well if the company employ an influencer. For example, there is a brand called Lining, a commonplace brand in China. The company employed Xiaozhan, a young influencer who has million fans, to do a commercial advertisement for a kind of clothes. Then, the sale volume of the ordinary clothes increased surprisingly, even exceeded some famous brands. This ripple effect is the advantage that improving employees’ skills does not have.
To put it in a nut shell, improving the employees' skills is crucial sometimes, but sometimes good location and effective advertisement can bring us more benefit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2122.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20098039216 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05744061247 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497549019608 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5454611909 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4166666667 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240943323741 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751618248139 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907166494425 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141959064839 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467350181956 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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