Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Technological development has made a process of preparing meals fast and easy. Personally, I think that the simplified cooking has increased our quality of life. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, if students who have families and jobs can cook quickly, they will have more time on studying. These days, being an educated person is essential since intellectually adept individuals have a lot of job opportunities and therefore, they are able to financially support their families. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I am a foreign pharmacist an in order to acquire a pharmaceutical license in the United States, I have to pass a number of professional and English tests, and so, I practice a lot. Moreover, I have two children and I am responsible to make them a dinner every day. In this way, I purchase pre-cooked foods in a local store, so cooking a supper takes no longer than fifteen minutes for me. Although some people argue that buying pre-cooked products is expensive, these foods indirectly help me to proceed with my career and excel in life.
Secondly, if people have an opportunity to save extra time on preparing meals, they can devote it to physical exercises and maintain their well-being. Healthy individuals have a lot of energy on enjoyable activities, which help them to feel happy. For instance, I have a wonderful set of kitchen appliances such as chopper, mixer, and fryer. These tools help me to prepare food quickly. The time left I spend on different important for me things such as visiting a gym. After my workouts I always feel very energized and often take my children to various entertaining places where we have fun together, take pictures, and make pivotal memories. On the other hand, if I had spent hours on cooking dishes for my youngsters, I would have been always tired and would not appreciate outdoor activities with my family. That is why I think that easy cooking is advantageous.
To conclude, I strongly believe that people have benefited from the fact that food preparation has become effortless. This is because saving time on cooking has helped people to establish their careers, and contributed to their physical and emotional well-being.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 730, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have always been
...oking dishes for my youngsters, I would have been always tired and would not appreciate outdoor ...
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Line 4, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heir physical and emotional well-being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, i think, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94255874674 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90657404251 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582245430809 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4412246605 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.65 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.15 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0883215535442 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300435970796 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389245697637 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664519845697 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372180744481 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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