Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has these changed improved the way people live.
Many years ago, people did not like cooking because they had to process all food from the beginning. Cut vegetables, onions, garlic and these made the art of cooking difficult. Nowadays, with the development of food industry, its preparation has become easier. As a result, has improved the way that people live. In the following essay, I will explain in detail why I believe so.
First, many of the food products come ready to eat. People do not have to process it. Others just need to put them on the microwave and In a few second will be ready. These are very beneficial for people who do not have time to cook or do not have enough lunch time. For example, there are many persons that work in offices or hospitals that only have a few minutes to lunch, these products that are already processed are fast to eat and would be very helpful for them. For instance, I work in a very busy dental office. I just only have twenty minutes lunch. For that reason, I always bring a frozen lasagna to eat during my lunch because is easy and fast to eat. Since I tried this kind of food I had not used other one.
Second, there are single mothers that work until late night. When they arrive to their homes they have to do other house works, such as take care of the babies, clean the house and organize the babies’ clothes. These kinds of food are helpful for those single mothers. Make their life easier because just with only press a bottom their food will be ready in instants. For example, my best friend work in the airport, sometimes she gets home late. As a result, she has made her life less complicated since she started using the same lasagna that I eat in my lunch time.
To sum up, since food has become easier to prepare many people has change their live. Cooking will not be any more a problem for those person that do not like cook.
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...king will not be any more a problem for those person that do not like cook.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39358600583 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11752143217 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507288629738 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0277193376 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5909090909 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206002463259 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705327586098 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106364095309 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159835118962 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096208582101 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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