o you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Public projects have tremendous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and in intangible way. It is utterly important to appreciate the role of the government in supporting these projects because of their indelible impact on the society. Although some people hold the viewpoint that it is more momentous to support internet rather than public transportation because many people prefer to use modern technology in all of their life aspects. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. My personal and actual observation of life which has led me to agree with the idea that it is more worthy to support public transportation. In the following essay, I shall delve into most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, by supporting the public transportation, will definitely reduce the car's number that are used by the people. This have a positive impact on ecosystem and ameliorate the environment. For instance, Malaysia, one of the most developing countries; start a new plan for 2020s to build a huge net of public transportation. During the world's meetings of greenhouse gases impact on the earth.Malasia mentioned its projects that will reduce the effect by about 7% of co2 that formed from private transportation. Apparently, it must be taken into account that greenhouse gases have a world wild impact and itmust be come in priority for al govenmnets to supprt it financially.
In addition, public transportation are more ease to use and more convenient for people especially those with low income. We can found many people use them because of its much cheaper, easy, and less time consuming than private cars. For example, the USA government use to build many route for buses coming to and for washington DC to make it more available to use of people especially the turists. Since the traffic jam and high prices of parking in the DC make many people to use the public transportation to reach their job, visit the historical museums, and see the white house. In view of the fact that it is deffinitely important to capitalize these transportation nto get satisfaction of the their citizens and visitors.
To sum up, after contemplating the reasons that I mentioned before, taking all the factors into consideration, I reinforce my idea that it is literally momentous to support the public transportation financially because of this will helping to enhance the environment globally and awards the citizens of the country to provide handy, suitable method to move in their travels as well as the turists and visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09905660377 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02020901816 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521226415094 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.4350797054 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.111111111 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240821755301 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072066416219 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571336608805 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132214363078 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598826349487 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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