In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources
It is clear that one of most important issues about all humans life is information on various issues as well as how to obtain this information. In this regard, some people may hold the opinion that if someone want to well-inform he or she must get information from many different resources while others may hold the opposite point of view. However, I am one of those who believe that in order to be aware of various issues, information must be obtain from multiple resources. There are many reasons to support my point of view and I would like to mention a few of most important ones where are as follows:
To begin with, get information from many different resources leads to familiar with many aspect of one particular subject. In fact each source has specific information about the main subject, combining this diverse information provides a comprehensive view of the subject. For example, when you want to describe a tree, you extract leaf information from one source and root information from another as well as stem information from another source. So by exploring these resources you have comprehensive information about tree.
The second rationale why I advocate this point of view is that the information obtain from several different resources is more accurate. For instance, in order to ensure the accuracy of news, I check it on various source such as newspaper, TV, Facebook and Telegram. In fact by doing so, I am finding out the truth of it. Therefore, the information obtain from review of several different resources is more accurate and reliable.
As an English proverb goes, "a coin has two sides", those who believe that one good resource is enough to well-informed are partially reasonable, because study a rich source saves time and cost. Nevertheless, with the fact that I outline above, I still believe that In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources
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- The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 61
- It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 70
- In order to be well informed a person must get information from many different news resources 60
- Task 1 tpo 22 85
- TPO 49 Integrated Writing Task 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
... one of most important issues about all humans life is information on various issues a...
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Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...le may hold the opinion that if someone want to well-inform he or she must get infor...
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Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...orm he or she must get information from many different resources while others may hold the opp...
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Line 1, column 606, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ost important ones where are as follows: To begin with, get information from many...
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Line 2, column 37, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... To begin with, get information from many different resources leads to familiar with many a...
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Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...ferent resources leads to familiar with many aspect of one particular subject. In fact each...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...iew is that the information obtain from several different resources is more accurate. For instanc...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
..., the information obtain from review of several different resources is more accurate and reliable...
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...med, a person must get information from many different news resources
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86619901333 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515432098765 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0474892022 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.615384615 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 5.45110844103 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.58203289079 0.236089414692 247% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212787486906 0.076458572812 278% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152523118334 0.0737576698707 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.365175750359 0.150856017488 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714907092448 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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