People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I believe that people decide to pursue higher education for various reasons which will help them in lead a better life. In particular, people attend college or university in order to add on to knowledge base and skill set. They wish to study in detail specific areas which interest them like astronomy, engineering, medicine, or literature. This helps them in gaining, among other things, intellectual fulfillment. The pursuit of knowledge can be an end in itself. Colleges and universities have highly qualified and knowledgeable instructors who have immense expertise in their field of study. Hence, they are the best place for an amateur to learn well from the best in the field.
Many times this pursuit is also a means in order to achieve secure career. Many people go to college or university with a foresight of what they plan to do professionally in the long term and how enrolling in a particular course will help them achieve success in that field. For example, people who wish to practice law work towards getting admission in a law school, or someone who wants to make a career as an actor will enroll in an acting school. A college degree is an official certification testifying to the skills of a person. It significantly increases the employability of a person. Hence, it is a pragmatic decision to go to college or university as it seriously increases your chances to do well professionally.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, well, for example, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 239.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90376569038 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97545734384 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581589958159 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4756108231 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1538461538 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290254406785 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892839992626 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717420559623 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221536501803 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00373960738258 0.0645574589148 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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