People Attend College Or University For Many Different Reasons (for Example, New Experiences, Career Preparation, Increased Knowledge). Why Do You Think People Attend College Or University? Use Specific Reasons And Examples To Support Your Answer.
First of all, some people attend college for the increased job and social opportunities they receive. In many universities students have opportunities to join clubs or sports teams that give them chances to try new activities, meet new people, and create lasting friendships. These social circumstances teach people about new areas of interest and improve social skills. A college education also opens up job opportunities. Colleges require students to take a variety of classes, which give people greater knowledge of many topics. This creates more job options for students who have a university degree rather than those that don’t. Seeking a degree creates better social and educational skills, which lead to varied life options.
Another reason people attend college is for career preparation. Some occupations require specific training that students can only receive in college. For example, a doctor must receive a college degree in biology before pursuing medical school. Before receiving a teaching license, students must complete required coursework including student teaching hours. Other careers that require a college degree are nursing, engineering, and law. All of these careers paths are impossible to enter without the training opportunities created through a college education. A university degree can be a necessary path towards preparing for certain careers, or can lead into those careers once a student finds a passion for the subject.
A final reason people attend college is for personal gains. Many of the personal benefits to gaining a college education include increased wealth and standard of life. In today’s job market, those people with college degrees have a better chance of employment. Also, those jobs that require a college degree are significantly higher paying jobs. If someone is trying to improve their standard of life a college degree can offer them more money and a generally higher standard of life that comes with better employment. Some people are trying to improver their personal and family situations through the increased job benefits of a college degree.
There are obviously many reasons for attending college. Whether it is for gaining more personal experiences, pursuing a specific career, or seeking a better standard of living, almost everybody can find some positive reason for enrolling in college. Although there are obviously many other reasons that people attend college these various examples highlight the potential benefits that almost anyone can hope to gain from the college experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sitive reason for enrolling in college. Although there are obviously many other reasons ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.321184510251 0.229887763892 140% => OK
Verbs: 0.164009111617 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0911161731207 0.0866891130778 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0273348519362 0.046263068375 59% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0136674259681 0.0685040099705 20% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.102505694761 0.118717715034 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0432801822323 0.0351676179071 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71977023765 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0205011389522 0.0309702414327 66% => OK
Particles: 0.00227790432802 0.00188951952338 121% => OK
Determiners: 0.100227790433 0.0887237588012 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0182232346241 0.0209618222197 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0159453302961 0.0139019557991 115% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2577.0 2387.08602151 108% => OK
No of words: 394.0 408.028673835 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.54060913706 5.86048508987 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.510152284264 0.338922669872 151% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.380710659898 0.251872472559 151% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.218274111675 0.174417080927 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109137055838 0.112833075102 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71977023765 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489847715736 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.979276155 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.9090909091 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.439154184 48.84282405 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.136363636 120.699889404 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.272727272727 0.644075263715 42% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 55.9801568989 45.7405998639 122% => OK
Elegance: 2.27777777778 1.45489161554 157% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341887100667 0.300154397459 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0838607411381 0.103427244359 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0540593945647 0.0752933317313 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.449582017288 0.497263757937 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11521553573 0.151897553556 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121477600309 0.114077575197 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768800649109 0.0781384742642 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.291933636707 0.336927656856 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.042538925328 0.067059652881 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234888876253 0.210909579961 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428253120299 0.0618886996521 69% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.