People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, and increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
now a day, there are many reasons to attend the school. some people attend to make career better, experience and increase the knowledge. In my opinion, people attend the school for career preparation. For many reasons which is described below.
first and foremost, for the fulfil their basic need people have to make a career in a specific field, so that they can make money. All the goods and services can be bought from the money which will make from the career. For example, I have done my graduation in electronic and communication engineering and now i am working information technology company. but I do not get paid well. Therefore I do not able to fulfil my basic need, sometimes I have to take money from the parents. so I am trying to pursue my master degree so I can get pay well. so joining school is very important for the basic needs. Because all the interviewer first see your degree and specialisation in your resume which is came from the school.
Secondly, To start your business, degree in business is very important, which will get you to make a great business man or woman. For instance, when you go a business meeting and interacting with the investor then they will judge you first by your degree and status of your universities and colleges when you are new in business. In addition to this, if you study in a good business school, many programs conduct by that university which directly benefited to the careers For example you can find a good job and may be some like your idea which will sponsor your idea and work later.
Last but not least, university and college also help in networking. people interact with many types of people and learn from them like personalities how to talk with other people and respect their ideas, culture, and good communication skills . which is very need in professional life as well as personal life to make a career advanced.
From the above reasons and examples, I strongly believe that people are attending universities and colleges for the career advancement. And it helps in all aspects which is needed in making careers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82191780822 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61797684123 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482191780822 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5624873453 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341854881714 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113789608098 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990262188747 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224821178836 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102242766453 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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