People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Almost all people in the world suffer from stress, because the modern life is full of difficulties. As a result, they have to find the way to get free from this disease called stress. Some prefer reading, others work in their yard, another way is doing exercise. In my view, the last one is the most exciting way of reducing stress for two reasons.
First, many studies have demonstrated that practicing sports is one of the most important activity to reduce level of stress. As a result, our mind would be busy, concentrate in what we are doing. There are many exercise that we can practice decreasing the stress, not only practicing in the gym, also running, practicing yoga, and riding bicycle. For example, I remember when I was studying dentistry in Rutgers School of Dental Medicine, I had high level of stress because I had to study hard to achieve my goals. During that time, I went to the doctor and he recommended practicing exercise. As a result, I improved my health and my mind started feeling more relax. I could prove that practicing exercise is the best way to reduce the stress.
Second, practicing exercises is a good way to make new friends. As a result, your circle of friend become more varied. At the gym, there are people from different countries and also cultures. In this way as your circle of friend increase your level of stress decrease because they keep you focus doing activities, such as hang out, and making competences at the gym. For example, I remember when I started going to the gym for first time, I was shy and I stress myself because I did not know any person there. As soon I was able to make new friend my level of stress reduced. Since then I enjoy going to the gym to practice my routine. Even though the work at the gym is hard I feel relax because my friends are hilarious and made feel distressed.
In conclusion, we cannot allow the stress be part of our life or routine. We have to struggle against it. There are many ways to fight it, but for me the best is practicing exercises.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51490514905 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4661574196 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49864498645 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0065049006 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7272727273 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7727272727 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263994543652 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817776972559 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725092936233 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180110913913 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096851193871 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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