People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Almost all people in the world suffer from stress, because the modern life is full of difficulties. As a result, they have to find the way to get rid of this disease called stress. Some prefer reading books, others work in their yards, another way is doing exercise. In my view, the last one is the most exciting way of reducing stress for two reasons.
First, many studies have demonstrated that practicing sports is one of the most important activities to reduce levels of stress. As a result, our minds would be busy, and would be able to concentrate in what we are doing. There are many exercises that we can practice to decrease stress, not only practicing at the gym, also running outside, practicing yoga, and riding our bikes. For example, I remember when I was studying dentistry in Rutgers School of Dental Medicine, I had high levels of stress because I had to study hard to achieve my goals. During that time, I went to the doctor and he recommended exercising. As a result, I improved my health and my mind started feeling more relaxed. After completing the doctor’s recommendation, I can now say that exercising is the best way to reduce stress.
Secondly, exercising is a good way to make new friends. As a result, your circle of friends become more varied. At the gym, there are people from different countries and also cultures. In this way as your circle of friends increases your level of stress can decrease because they keep you focused doing activities, such as hanging out, and giving each other challenges at the gym. For example, I remember when I started going to the gym the first time I was shy. I would stress myself out because I did not know anyone there. As soon as I was able to make new friends my level of stress reduced. Since then, I enjoy going to the gym to practice my routine. Even though the workout at the gym is hard I feel relaxed because my friends are hilarious and make me feel at ease.
In conclusion, we cannot allow stress to be part of our life or routine. We have to fight against it. There are many ways to achieve it, but for me the best is exercising at the gym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50129198966 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52460995589 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496124031008 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7544740999 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7391304348 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8260869565 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13043478261 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262820692754 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759552507031 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751207917502 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183484039379 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111229107481 0.0645574589148 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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