People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Everybody endures stress and its negative effects in today’s hectic and competitive life so, it is necessary to find some ways to alleviate stress. Faced with this contentious subject, people have various options to reduce stress like, gardening, exercising, reading book or other choices. When it comes to me, I personally favour short trips and go country because of few reasons.
First of all, we have a garden in country, where is near to city and I can do a lot of activities alongside the trips. I have a little terrarium that contains beautiful flowers and I spent some times with my flowers and do gardening every weekends. Besides, when I do gardening I have to concentrate on my work and it gives me a good opportunity to release my mind from stress. In addition, I play music when I do gardening; sometimes I dance or sing with music. It is a kind of light exercise and mixture of these two activity, I mean gardening and music, gives me joy and energy.
Second, The way to our garden is very scenic and photography is one of my hobbies. I stop on my way and take beautiful pictures from nature. It has a great impression on my stress reduction because when I search for a good view or appopriate scene or object for photography, I need to concentrate. It completely converts my mind from stress. Furthermore, I take some funny and amazing pictures with my friends and later when I watch them they remind me a sense of happiness. Moreover being in nature itself abates suppressed stress and negative energy and It is very advantageous for both mind and body.
The last one, as I said I spend my weekends on our family garden with my family or my friends. These times are full of joy and positive energy. We cook on fire by organic harvest of garden like potatoes and tomatoes. In addition, we do some group games with each other, speak about life and difficulties. These friendly speeches help us to deviate our minds from stress, help each other and offer suggestions like, what should do with a disciplinarian and inexorable boss? Family and friendly gatherings are great help to me and most of us to deplete stress and raise our energy.
In conclusion, It is undeniable that everybody needs to decrease stress of daily life to live, work and do more effective, but different people have different choices to this alleviation. Some prefer gardening, some reading and some favour exercising. I personally choose short trips as my solution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to short'
Suggestion: to short
... favour exercising. I personally choose short trips as my solution.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'i mean', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236514522822 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.151452282158 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0871369294606 0.0866891130778 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0207468879668 0.046263068375 45% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.116182572614 0.0685040099705 170% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0995850622407 0.118717715034 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0186721991701 0.0351676179071 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77341645481 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0311203319502 0.0309702414327 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0580912863071 0.0887237588012 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00414937759336 0.0209618222197 20% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0165975103734 0.0139019557991 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2463.0 2387.08602151 103% => OK
No of words: 430.0 408.028673835 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72790697674 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323255813953 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241860465116 0.251872472559 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174418604651 0.174417080927 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123255813953 0.112833075102 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77341645481 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 57.8458580817 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6956521739 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6382031071 48.84282405 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.086956522 120.699889404 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6956521739 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.644075263715 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 42.8816986855 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.23021582734 1.45489161554 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337473905133 0.300154397459 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0953462520323 0.103427244359 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0771408311851 0.0752933317313 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.47396136686 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.111369639696 0.151897553556 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119581596175 0.114077575197 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663751731358 0.0781384742642 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.333700656976 0.336927656856 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0649877213934 0.067059652881 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234064339791 0.210909579961 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032677724868 0.0618886996521 53% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.