Do You Agree Or Disagree With The Following Statement? Dancing Plays An Important Role In A Culture. Use Specific Reasons And Examples To Support Your Answer.
when faced with this question, quite a few with a perfunctory glance would claim they cannot discover important connection between dancing and culture, but when it comes to me, I strongly support the trace of dancing in culture because of some conspicuous reasons. The most important ones are cultural and overall.
According to cultural view, Music and dancing of each country contain valuable cultural and historical characteristics. Music and dance convey these concepts through nature of dancing, emotions, garments and musical instruments. Everyone can find trace of his/her history and legends in the festivals, dances, rituals ceremonies and operas. For example, Azerbaijani dancing has very fast rhythms and demands completely grace and limber body. Each movement of men's dance demonstrates kind of fighting technique including fighting with sword, dirk and very fast movements and unbelievable jumps. In contrast, women's movements portray soft rhythms that show manual gathering of gripe from orchards along with singing. Therefore, dancing is a significant medium for introducing and saving your cultural and historical events.
Overall, dancing is an inducement for economic promotion and can help countries to enrich the overall income. For example, Manual dance festivals and musical programs that are performed in sport matches like Olympics and worldwide football matches attract lot of people from all over the world as tourist. In consequence, it brings good income for whole country and government through tourists and big sponsors. Besides, in musical programs and concerts, a part of income or whole of it allocated to needy people in poor countries. These kind of musical and dancing festivals and movements boost humanism and enrich human' culture. In addition, as you know today some of customary ceremonies wipe out because of migration to cities. Traditional dancing festivals help to prevent elimination of ritual and old-styled ceremonies and make them known to other people. Thus, overall benefits of dancing are undeniable.
In conclusion, some people at first glance find it a little hard to see obvious bond between dance and culture, but as I mentioned above There are little and big credits that show worthiness of dance and music in every culture. Due to numerous argues including cultural and overall ones, I personally support merit of dance in important aspects of culture.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'as to', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'kind of', 'you know']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.29156626506 0.229887763892 127% => OK
Verbs: 0.120481927711 0.158761421928 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.127710843373 0.0866891130778 147% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0240963855422 0.046263068375 52% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0289156626506 0.0685040099705 42% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132530120482 0.118717715034 112% => OK
Participles: 0.033734939759 0.0351676179071 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74786241779 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.021686746988 0.0309702414327 70% => OK
Particles: 0.00240963855422 0.00188951952338 128% => OK
Determiners: 0.0506024096386 0.0887237588012 57% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00963855421687 0.0209618222197 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0120481927711 0.0139019557991 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2414.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 373.0 408.028673835 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.47184986595 5.86048508987 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.45308310992 0.338922669872 134% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.386058981233 0.251872472559 153% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.254691689008 0.174417080927 146% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152815013405 0.112833075102 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74786241779 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563002680965 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 63.9540397873 59.2087087015 108% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.6315789474 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5562785846 48.84282405 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.052631579 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.736842105263 0.644075263715 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 58.2374770707 45.7405998639 127% => OK
Elegance: 2.63888888889 1.45489161554 181% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257336413119 0.300154397459 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.099508021336 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0571819383835 0.0752933317313 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.521409814992 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158047172328 0.151897553556 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104726385356 0.114077575197 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419953894897 0.0781384742642 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.400677362024 0.336927656856 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0981962548002 0.067059652881 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195351416949 0.210909579961 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363046307587 0.0618886996521 59% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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