Many students have to live with a roommate while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate?
Living away from comfort of home is not an easy job. Students start missing their family and experience some problems in dorms. There are numerous qualities for a good roommate and I explore a few of them as most important ones. On my part, the most significant features of good roommate are being respectful and responsibility.
First of all, students have brought up in different families, cultures and religions. Even more, some of them come from other countries and face a completely uncommon lifestyle, so being respectful and having an easy going personality help to match and understand each other easily. Another essential factor is respecting to privacy and rights of each other. For example, if one of roommates wants to study and the other one wants to listen music, he/she should listen with headphone and avoid disturbing the other one. Thus, being flexible one helps them to solve different problems with together and do not complain about every little aspect.
Second one, another quality that deserves considering is having responsibility to manage the living place together. They should share the tasks and cooperate in accomplishing them. As an example, I remember my student life, when I was living with a roommate, we had distributed all duties, cooking and washing dishes were mine, because I was a good chef, and the cleaning of home was belonging to my friend. In addition because we were classmate too we were helping each other in lessons and were doing common project. That kind of cooperation helps students feel more supportive and more sense of responsibility especially in emergencies like illness and studying, because they are the closest people to each other on that section of time and life.
In conclusion, living in dorms with roommates is problematic but can be a joyful experience if you live with a suitable one. There are different characteristics for an ideal roommate, but when it comes to me, I choose being respectful and responsibility as the important ones because of mentioned details.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to consider'.
Suggestion: to consider
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Message: The verb belong is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'belonged'
Suggestion: belonged
...s a good chef, and the cleaning of home was belonging to my friend. In addition because we we...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...s a good chef, and the cleaning of home was belonging to my friend. In addition because we we...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... of home was belonging to my friend. In addition because we were classmate too we were h...
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to be'.
Suggestion: to be
...mate, but when it comes to me, I choose being respectful and responsibility as the im...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.210810810811 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.172972972973 0.158761421928 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102702702703 0.0866891130778 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0405405405405 0.046263068375 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0567567567568 0.0685040099705 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118918918919 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0567567567568 0.0351676179071 161% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84568590486 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0243243243243 0.0309702414327 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0027027027027 0.00188951952338 143% => OK
Determiners: 0.0864864864865 0.0887237588012 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00810810810811 0.0209618222197 39% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00810810810811 0.0139019557991 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2036.0 2387.08602151 85% => OK
No of words: 335.0 408.028673835 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0776119403 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355223880597 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.280597014925 0.251872472559 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208955223881 0.174417080927 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140298507463 0.112833075102 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84568590486 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561194029851 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 61.3773305429 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9375 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.831560255 48.84282405 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.644075263715 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 48.9972014925 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.43 1.45489161554 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288836437185 0.300154397459 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0890258990262 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0731421253478 0.0752933317313 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.497498918829 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122266216399 0.151897553556 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112261402012 0.114077575197 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648412887783 0.0781384742642 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.295537938366 0.336927656856 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0686242132819 0.067059652881 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206897945101 0.210909579961 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353203904935 0.0618886996521 57% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.