People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Work is an integral part of human life. Since the dawn of civilization, the tendency to work has brought upon major breakthroughs for mankind. Be it for himself or for others, humans have strived hard for the betterment and this has been the major driving force for the evolution through the ages.
People work not only to earn money but also for different reasons. The purpose of the efforts varies from individual to individual. There are people who work for their self-satisfaction and there are people who work to pursue their interests and their dreams. The motivation for work varies across the people as well through age. For example, a young, dynamic student who has just graduated from college and taken up a job opportunity may work in order to gain industrial experience and then proceed further to pursue his further studies. Or he may even take up the job as he has core interests associated with it and this may help him develop further in the field.
It may sound uncanny but there are instances when some people take up an odd job just for the sake of self-satisfaction which he did not find in the previous job. For example, a successful surgeon who has had a successful career in the medical field may take up the job of a truck driver so that he can fulfil his interests in trucking. There are wide reasons for someone to work in an unconventional fashion.
There are people, too, who just work in order to serve others and engage in humanitarian activities. This is because their conscience tells them to do so. They find peace when they see other people in comfort and therefore strive to better the lives of others. They contribute to the society by working in the non-profitable organizations like the NGO’s, etc. The greatest example among such people is Mother Teresa. She worked for the upliftment of the people who were deprived of the opportunities and were not considered of the same status in the society. She established a humanitarian organization in the city of Kolkata, India which served such people. And she has proved to be an inspiration to all the future generations through her contribution towards humanity. She was awarded a Nobel Peace Prize for the work she carried out.
Thus, it can be concluded that the sole purpose of work varies from person to person depending on his skills, interests and attitude towards life. It is not always the money which brings the eternal satisfaction in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78723404255 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77030835183 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501182033097 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.026786399 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0434782609 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3913043478 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78260869565 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209941038077 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716459576114 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633431264052 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108453671639 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615430496415 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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