People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Having a job in today’s modern society is not necessarily an option to choose but an obligation. However, I believe that if the economic situation did not rule the world, there would be some people who would prefer to work. This essay will explore some other reasons for having a job from social and personal views.
Socially-speaking, people work in order to have a positive impact on their societies, which will lead them to a higher self-satisfaction. In fact, living in groups puts the onus of improvement and making a better life on its all members. Thus, by working, people feel they have an active impact on the development of life quality in the communities and changing the world into a better place for life. For example, a doctor can do a lot. He studied and worked hard during his whole life, and he did not do this just to make money. Now, he can help people with their health and well-being. He is able to cure different diseases and save lives, find new ways of treatments and help people recover from diseases faster or learn to live with a disabling injury and so forth. Therefore, a doctor has a dominant role in his society because he can provide good health for other ones.
From a personal perspective, working can help us develop a good personality, which will lead us to become stronger and enjoy a more efficient life. In addition to general qualifications, every job needs a couple of specific characteristics. Thus, we either should be qualified for the profession or build the required qualities and skills. For instance, an engineer should be creative to find new and correct solutions for the problems he may face during his projects. Besides, he has to be patient because engineering projects are usually long-term and he needs to wait to see the final results of his work. Moreover, engineering usually needs team-work, so the members should have the required features of working in groups like flexibility in their opinions and timetables. Thus, for someone who wants to be an engineer, it is necessary to have some special character traits to be successful during his career path, which he either is the owner of or has to develop.
On the whole, I think that many people do not work only for economic prosperity. They work because having a job not only helps them to be more useful and effective for their societies but also provides a strong base to improve their personality.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in fact, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78042959427 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8030556339 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522673031026 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6756684026 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.15 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.95 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200284702709 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637020491583 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044071805547 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136028234993 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262594212364 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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