People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons.
Most people in the world need a job in order to get money. However, money is not always the main goal. There are people who look for other interests such as a challenging job, enjoyable activities, and good health. I will develop these areas in the following paragraphs.
First of all, money is a vital source for people, but being challenged is another necessary source as well. People definitely need to feel stimulated when they are working. Thus, people cannot only archive goals but also continue working. Surely, a regular employee cannot chose a different job. However, if they have a better alternative, they could choose something different to do which interests them. Otherwise, in a while, they could become extremely frustrated and quit their job.
Second, working should be an enjoyable activity. In other words, people, who experience stressful activities, do not need to stay there longer. Of course, many people are not under hard stress, but they have to figure out a balance between stressful jobs and enjoyable environment. For instance, my job is a veterinarian in a huge clinic, and I have to admit, when a new difficult case comes which is hard to know how to treat, I start to feel super nervous, but at the same time, I start to feel under pressure, transforming that stressful moment into a comfortable sensation which is one hundred percent enjoyable.
Finally, nobody can deny that people who have work feel healthy. However, people, who for some reason are not working, could develop some diseases. Several research studies have supported this statement claiming that people who are not working, could deteriorate their body metabolism. Drawing from my own experience, a few years ago, I had a perfect job, but for some personal reason I had to quick it. For a while, I stayed at home where I began to feel weird and unhealthy. I had to go to the doctor, and his diagnostic was that I had a severe lack of work. I could understand that everyone has to work in order to keep a healthy body and a healthy brain.
In conclusion, money is not the only reason for working. I am convinced that there are other reasons which people have, such as a challenging job, enjoyable activities, and good health.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, second, so, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, of course, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82506527415 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68032166645 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519582245431 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.0852642294 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.347826087 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.652173913 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269840492385 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791762152605 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521678408671 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159371248413 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424651018304 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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