A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Considering the topic of the question, it focuses on the main feature of my town and the chief bad spots of my city for the person who want to live there. As far as I am concerned, I live in Tehran, the capital of Iran. Regarding the main features of my town, I am strongly inclined to take the side of the enormous facilities, and the high quality culture. On the other hand, the traffic problems, environmental pollution and diversity of people who live there can be indicated as the main disadvantages. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, there are numberless facilities in my town. Being one of the most proliferated characteristics of all cities, the facilities play a vital role. In addition, the facilities of the city such as the transportation facility, recreational facility, and communication facility determine the standard of living in the city. For instance, the most crowded cities of the United Stated such as Los Angeles, Boston and Washington are marked as the high standard cities for living. They have appropriate transportation system. The quality and velocity of the Internet in them are wonderful and they are associated with the numerous worth watching place which can be implied as the recreational area. Considering this point, among other cities in Iran, the transportation system in Tehran are powerful. It has subway and VIP buses. Most of the chief routes which are connected the different geographic parts of cities are highways. Although in some parts of time, my town struggles with the traffic problem, regarding the vast area covered by the people, in comparison with other cities, the transportation system of my town has significant preference.
Another primary advantage of my town which the person would like is the high quality culture of the people. With respect to the crucial role of the city's culture, there is causal relation between the quality of living on one hand and the people culture living there on the other hand. As the current social science findings reveal, the society can be denoted as the different groups of people who live together. It is obvious that the people with low quality culture bring about multitude difficulties particularly the violent problems. Thus, the culture can be recognized as the vital factor for city security. Nor the city transportation facilities neither the recreational area cannot be characterized as the importance of the city security. Although Tehran is described as the hustle and bustle city which has great potential of crime, the high security is referred as one of the main advantages of it.
Aside from the point I made above, the traffic jam and environmental pollution can be addressed as the chief disadvantages of my town. Regardless the high quality of transportation system, the most of the people usually complain about sticking in the traffic jam. As Tehran can be implied as the metropolitan city, the high population is one of the main reasons of this problem. In addition, the high population usually is in conjunction with the environmental problem. For instance, the heating systems which work with fossil fuel produce huge amount of carbon dioxide. Thus, the person would categorically dislike the traffic problem and the health characteristics of my city.
Taking all of these perspectives into account, with regard to the main quality of living in my city such as numerous facilities and recreational area, in my opinion, there are some problems which can be handled by selecting the appropriate home.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 413, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is usually
...oblem. In addition, the high population usually is in conjunction with the environmental p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, so, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, with regard to, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3017.0 1977.66487455 153% => OK
No of words: 591.0 407.700716846 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10490693739 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93056706295 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96057041734 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428087986464 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 960.3 618.680645161 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 18.0 3.08781362007 583% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5386819153 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.034482759 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3793103448 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58620689655 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129097886858 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401069342315 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379971771264 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804104259018 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268400227557 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 86.8835125448 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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