Pets should be treated like family members. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion
Some people think that pets should not be treated as family members. They cite this based on their belief that the pets are animals and should not get the treatment as humans. I however, strongly disagree with this and believe that pets should be treated like family members. The three reasons of my belief are are follows.
First of all, pets are loyal to thier owners. For example, I petted a dog for five years and always treated it as a member of my family and not as an animal. Whenever we used to go out from our house to any other places such as to our relatives or to the market, my dog always used to guard the house and wait for us to return. Moreover, one night an intruder tried to enter our house and it was only because of the continuous barking of my dog, he ran away. Hence, dogs are such a loyal friends to us, so they deserve to be treated as a family member.
Secondy, pets are obedient when treated nicely. For example, one of my friends pets a dog which is around 1 year old. My freind does not treat the dog properly and kicks it whenever it does something wrong. As a result of this, the dog is always scared and tries to run away and hide from him. However, the other members of his family treats the dog with love and provide proper care to it and because of this, the dog is obedient to them and follows them where ever they go and does what ever they say.
Finally, pets are good friends to people. Whenever you are alone in your house and you are feeling low, your pet will always be your side to accompany. Pets don't dont demand anything from the owners expect for their love. For example, last summer, all of my family members were gone to one of our relatives such that it was just me and mydog in my house. I would have easily got bored if my dog was not with me that day to play with me and to accompany me. Thus it is very important to treat your pet like family members because they also think of us a family only.
In conclusion, though some people might think that pets should be treated as animals, I strongly disagree with it and believer that pets have every right to be treated as family members because they are loyal to us and provide security to our house, they are obedient and trustful, and they are our friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24249422633 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04413954327 2.67179642975 77% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43648960739 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2862032629 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4761904762 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.619047619 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61904761905 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294355689907 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108108578358 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11263994862 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203942012789 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121166471837 0.0645574589148 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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