Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or country because they lose their old friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The idea of moving to a new town has been always debated among people about whether it is a good decision or not. While many people think moving to a new place or city can be hard to tolerate because you lose your old friends, I strongly believe that actually, immigrating to a new place can be beneficial for you in some ways. I will elaborate on why I feel this way in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, although it is possible for you to lose some of your old friends when moving to a new city, you can still have a chance to find new friends in the new town. Finding new friends is really good for your mental health and these friends can decrease your loneliness when you immigrated to a new city. For instance, a few years ago, when my father decided to move to a new city because of his new job, I was completely depressed because I could not see my friends anymore. But after we moved to a new town, I could find new friends and I could also overcome my depression. Hence, moving to a new city is neither harmful nor a bad thing.
Secondly, another conspicuous and ubiquitous reason that moving to a new city is not a bad idea is that you can still maintain your connection with your old friends. This is due to the advancement of technology and using smartphones. It is actually not a hard thing to pick up your phone and make a video call with your friends these days. When my family and I moved to a new city, for example, I used video calls to maintain my connection with my friends. We used to talk with each other for hours and we enjoyed our time being together virtually. Had I not had this smartphone, I would not have been able to make a video call with my friend. Therefore, due to technology, you can easily move to any city and still have your friends.
To put my words in a nutshell, I strongly believe that moving to a new city is not disadvantageous for you. The reason for that is not only you can make new friends when you move to a new city, but you can also keep your old friend by using smartphones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has always been
The idea of moving to a new town has been always debated among people about whether it i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23017902813 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4580573171 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42199488491 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1640317346 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2941176471 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352926268403 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134796294395 0.076458572812 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730793551547 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252138540721 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316196734405 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.55 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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