Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e-mail, they will produce better work for the project.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
While most professional people who work in the most prestigious companies think communicating through email is a more efficient and more time-saving option, I personally prefer face-to-face communication when working on a project. I think time is not the most important factor when you are dealing with colossal work and projects. I will elaborate on why I think this way about the aforementioned statement in the following paragraphs.
The first and foremost reason why I think meeting people is more efficient than e-mail communication is simply that you can understand and comprehend each other’s points a lot better. I personally remember when I asked my professor a long time ago to write me a recommendation letter through email, but he simply reject me because of my resume. The next week I went to see him and explain to him my situation about why I did not boost my resume and unbelievably, he accept my request. Therefore, you should accept that having a face-to-face meeting is a more effective way than just typing some words behind your computer.
The second noticeable and ubiquitous reason why in-person communication is better is that you can motivate each other when you're facing a hard time. personally speaking, talking through emails is emotionless. you can, on the other hand, generate emotion and express yourself, and motivates your colleagues when they are in a bad condition. For instance, when I was in high school, I and my friend had to work on a project to gain information about Iranian scientists. At the same time, my friend got depressed and I was the only one who could help him to overcome his problems only by talking to him and listening carefully to his words.
To summarize my point of view, I feel that working on projects should not be done by e-mail. first, because it's hard to figure out your classmate's point in an e-mail conversation. moreover, you can't motivate your friend when they are under harsh conditions in their personal or professional life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'rejects'.
Suggestion: rejects
...ion letter through email, but he simply reject me because of my resume. The next week ...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'accepts'.
Suggestion: accepts
...ot boost my resume and unbelievably, he accept my request. Therefore, you should accep...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...s that you can motivate each other when youre facing a hard time. personally speaking...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Personally
...ch other when youre facing a hard time. personally speaking, talking through emails is emo...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... talking through emails is emotionless. you can, on the other hand, generate emotio...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
... projects should not be done by e-mail. first, because its hard to figure out your cl...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...smates point in an e-mail conversation. moreover, you cant motivate your friend when the...
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Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n an e-mail conversation. moreover, you cant motivate your friend when they are unde...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95845697329 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97566493344 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551928783383 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7124548413 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263827233695 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926616315187 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514808933334 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167321125136 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046490266506 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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