The rules that the society today requires young people to follow and obey are too strict
Some people contend that rules in modern society is quite strict that impose divergent limitation on juvenile's behavior. However, I hold the opposite view that those stipulations are necessary for young's development.
Admittedly, some voices rise that there are numerous meaningless rules that young one has to obey, or they will be punished. At the same time, these so-called necessary rules seem trivial and irrelevant with their future, like wearing uniforms in high school and submitting assignments before the deadline, all of which arguably impose too much burden on young people. However, in my opinion, I contend that these stipulations are efficient for preventing them from negative effects.
In great contrast, enforcement of rules is an excellent way to help young people to foster positive behaviors. For an example, in China, most of schools have requirement that students have to wear uniforms when they are in the campus. Although such rule is opposed and overlooked by both students and parents, in fact it is necessary to preclude students paying much attention on extravagant clothing. without relevant rules, there would be bunch of students fascinate on those lavish things, comparing with others. However, as a student, they do not have any income and almost all of their allowance is from their parents. Therefore, they should not squander their parent's money on those meaningless things. Furthermore, if they put their focus on their clothing, instead of studying, their education performance would be impaired, which diminish their competitiveness in the future.
Apart from that, another benefit of those is facilitate their sterling behavior. It is generally acknowledged that under the constraints of stipulations, gradually, though juveniles are reluctant to obey them, they would be forced to generate good habits. Specifically, no matter in high school and university, students are required to hand in their work in advance of deadline, or they would more likely to get a inferior score as punishment. Even though each student has to face the huge pressure before deadline, it has benefits on their development. If teachers do not punish them for their inertia, other students would not only feel unfair, but also intentionally submit their assignments late. However, in modern society, all of corporations are underscoring such efficiency that they would not to employ those who accustomed to hand in their completions after stipulation. Thus, those seemingly strict rules actually are helping students to meet the requirement of the society.
In a nutshell, I still remain that the rules of society are not stringent. Anyone who obey the rules smoothly would get a chance to be more accessible for success than others do not.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'juveniles'' or 'juvenile's'?
Suggestion: juveniles'; juvenile's
...ict that impose divergent limitation on juveniles behavior. However, I hold the opposite ...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the schools') or simply say ''most schools''.
Suggestion: most of the schools; most schools
...ve behaviors. For an example, in China, most of schools have requirement that students have to ...
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Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Without
...much attention on extravagant clothing. without relevant rules, there would be bunch of...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'facilitated'.
Suggestion: facilitated
... from that, another benefit of those is facilitate their sterling behavior. It is generall...
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Line 7, column 413, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...dline, or they would more likely to get a inferior score as punishment. Even thou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, apart from, as to, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2337.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36009174312 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86335827236 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545871559633 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5263760675 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7619047619 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171022520744 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058132110153 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06775624208 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123804527438 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531887956955 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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