smoking

Essay topics:

smoking

Should employers provide smoking rooms for smoker employees?

Cigarette is one of the worst things has made by humans. Each year it kills so many people and there is not even a proved positive effect about smoking. But, some people are highly addicted to it and cannot concentrate on their work if they do not smoke during their work. Some people say that employers must provide some places for smoking, on the other hand, some people are against it. In my view, smoking can really kill and employers should not let their employees smoke during their work. Here is two of my reasons for holding this idea.

First, smoking kills. Each time we turn the television or radio on, we hear about bad effects of smoking on health. We are all aware of the deep connection between smoking and lots of cancers. If we let people to smoke while they are doing their work, we will let them to ignore all bad effects of cigarette easily. But, if we prohibit the employees of smoking, they may have more time and chance to really think about bad effects of Cigarette. In addition, providing some areas for smoking will lead to increase in the number of people who smoke and can even may encourage non-smoker people to smoke. Last year I get hired in a big company, they had a room for smoking and employees could easily go there and smoke. I saw how easily the number of people who smoke increased each month; finally, when the number of smoker employees showed a notable increase, the chief manager of the company prohibited the smoking and some people who had just started to smoke did not continue it anymore.

Second, smoking in work place increases the level of chemical elements in the environment. It is crystal clear that smoking rooms are one of the dirtiest and polluted places and can lead to lots of problems. One of these problems is increase of chemical elements in the work environment. Some global standard institutions like ISO has composed some rules about the maximum allowed level of chemical elements in work environments, and those places which have smoking room, have higher level of chemical elements compared to standard range. This amount of chemical elements can lead to decrease of employees
‘s health which will cost a lot for company to pay for their treatment and hospital costs too.
Third, smoking is bad for health. The staining on your hands and teeth will worsen. Your fingers will start to shake when you need a cigarette. The cravings will be much more intense the longer you go without a cigarette; getting near others who are smoking or smell like smoke can also trigger cravings easily. What was once an enjoyable habit has become a necessity. You will also notice that your breathing may have become more ragged. That’s because scar tissue is building up in through throat and lungs. Your entire respiratory system is breaking down because of the smoking habit. That scar tissue means the cancer is probably in your future. You can look forward to dealing with lung, throat and mouth cancer. You won’t have to deal with them for very long though, as they can lead to death. If they don’t cause you to die, then you will at least need to have sections of your throat, mouth, and lungs removed. Mechanical replacements can be used instead, but they won’t be pleasant to deal with.
To cut the long story short, all I want to say is that, some people like to smoke, because they believe smoking can make them calm, and help them to work better. On the other hand, we have so many researches on the effects of smoking on decrease of life quality which will lead to decrease in the quality of work too. In my view, no matter how many people think smoking can help them. They are all wrong and we must help them to change their mind in this regard. Prohibiting of smoking in work places is one of the things we can do and by not providing smoking areas we can give them this chance to think more wisely about bad effects of smoking.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 395, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
... a necessity. You will also notice that your breathing may have become more ragged. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, really, second, so, then, third, while, as for, at least, in addition, in my view, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 32.0 9.8082437276 326% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 99.0 52.1666666667 190% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3287.0 1977.66487455 166% => OK
No of words: 706.0 407.700716846 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65580736544 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.1546736571 4.48103885553 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28773887658 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 300.0 212.727598566 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.42492917847 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 995.4 618.680645161 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.6003584229 184% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1176260707 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 3.85842293907 467% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422528875142 0.236089414692 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137872476713 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146130409194 0.0737576698707 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227025317812 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140375053864 0.0645574589148 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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