the societies rules that young people should follow are too strict
In the last two decades, the rules that young people should follow have become a common trend. Some people believe that these rule are too strict; however, there is another substantial body of evidence claims that young adult should obey societies' rule. From a personal perspective, I concur that the latter point of view carries more weight given that these rules have a positive impact on youngsters' personality, safety and contribution. Below I will strive to explain my supporting point in more details.
The first and foremost point, today there are an abundance of socities rules that help to enhance youth's behaviors. For instance, in California, there is a probibition of usage alcohols and tobaccor for juniors that less than tweenty one years old. Furthermore, the driving age has increased in some states to eighteen years old, which has reduced cars' accidents in these states drastically. To put it in other words, some socities rules are set on the attention to aware young people no to go down on a dark path. Consequently, socities rules are imperative for youth's attitudes.
Next, coupled with safety, proper personality is another benefit of the stricted rules. A vivid example that could be given to shed light on that kids in the developed countries, such as Canada and the US, have a legal protection against bullying. Provided that students are suffer from bullying, it could have a detrimental influence on their attention and confidence. Thus, these rules could be an immadiate stop for a bad behavior. Therefore, rules that children should follow are imperative.
Ultimately, contribution is another subtle point that should be born on mind. Likewise, some universities have specific rules to encourage their students to help their communities. A personal example for that, two years ago, one of my friend should do a volunteer work in a nursing home. She did not have enough time to do this job since she had lots of study. Hence, she could not graduate this year because her university had a stricter rule to do specific volunteer hours to garduate. Although she was frustrated at the begining, she felt great after she did this job. Doing a volunteer job not only promote her responsibility, but also her experience. In addition to that, she get accustomed to helping her community. Therefore, some strict rules play a vital role to encourage youngsters to improve their socities.
Taking everything into consideration, without a doubt, the rules that young people should follow nowadays are not strict; on the contrary, they are imperative. It is suggested that young adults should compromise to obey socities' rules.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... on the attention to aware young people no to go down on a dark path. Consequently...
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Suggestion: suffered
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ould compromise to obey socities rules.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, likewise, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2219.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11290322581 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7815412058 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543778801843 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1179498263 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.76 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.36 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354580889704 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953900818967 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130182075447 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223007963145 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147466212877 0.0645574589148 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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