Some believe that one should spend more time being far away from the people we care about, because it is necessary for people to understand the importance of relationship of people we care about, while others think being away from people we care about can damage our relationships with them. Which one do you agree with? Why?
Interpersonal relationship, the foundation of everyone's daily life, has triggered heated discussion over whether spending more time being far away from people we care about could strengthen the relationship between each other. some people think that being away from intimate people can let us realize the importance of this relationship. contrary to these people's view is my perspective that being away from each other will definitely impair this relationship, due to the lack of time they stay together, and the failure to help each other when encounter difficulities.
What should be prioritized is that being far away from the a person means that we are not able to do something together, including study and entertainment. To begin with, owing to the shackle of distance, it is difficult for us to study with the person we care if we live in different place. On the contrary, if we are not far from each other, we can do homework or prepare for the exam together. during the whole process, we can discuss and learn different perspective from each other, and become more and more intimate. In addition, during spare time, we can also do some entertainment, such as go shopping, watch movies and so on, if we live
close
to each other. however, when living far from a person, little activities can be done face to face. The less time we spend doing activities together, the less we know from each other, and thus we may even gradually forget each other if we stay far for a long time.
Besides, living
close
to each other also means that we can render assistance if one of the two people meat some difficulities. take me for example, last year I had to go to Japan for a academic confrence, but since I lived alone in a city far from my family members and friends, no body can take care of my ped dog, so I have to leave it to the ped shop which take me a large amount of money. however, if my friends live in the same city, I can ask them for help. Therefore, if we live near with the person we care, we can give a hand when that person encounter troubles. By solving his problems together, we will feal a sense of achievement and that person will feal greatful. during this course, our relationship will become more intimate.
In conclusion, being away from people we care will damage this relationship. Only by staying
close
to each other can we strengthen this relationship by doing thing together and help each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73317865429 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67402776166 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475638051044 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2765494001 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9444444444 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.494690081046 0.236089414692 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185196791413 0.076458572812 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120290542086 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298811380506 0.150856017488 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121304125307 0.0645574589148 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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