Some jobs can pay high salaries but require employees to leave their family and friends. Other jobs pay few salaries but allow employees to stay with family and friends. Which job do you prefer and why?
people nowadays like traveling foreign countries more than ever before. While some people like traveling their domestic country, others like traveling to foreign countries depending on their own tastes. However, I believe that people benefit more from traveling to foreign countries than in their own countries.
First and foremost, traveling foreign countries enables people to learn more and expand their insights outlooks. Most laymen are growing up in their domestic country and do not have a chance to live in another country. Even if they get know about countries around the world through books or the Internet, the lack of firsthand experience tend to make them short-sighted and narrow-minded. In this case, people can broaden their perspective by immersed into foriegn life styles and learning about cultures or social systems. My friend's experience can be used to prove this point. he was too proud of himself being American to neglect other cultures. he never respect foreigner and showed arogant attitudes. One day, he had a chance to travel to South Korea and, by the chance, he went to see a concert performed by BTS, the famous group of korean dance singers. he was fascinated by the performance and totally fell love in korean culture at the end of the trip. In short, the travel gave him an opportunity to observe and feel cultures, and eventually broaden his horizon.
Moreover, traveling foreign country lead to innovative ideas and thinkings by inspiring them in exotic moods and situations. people tend to stock into rigid thinking process and not to be able to think outside of their boxes. In this regard, traveling another country is an excellent chance for people to refresh themselve and thus bring new ideas. In fact, many business leaders went to travel to exotic countries in order to find business items.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while, as to, in fact, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09933774834 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57570136729 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602649006623 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8625706949 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5882352941 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0418707194038 0.236089414692 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0155421697159 0.076458572812 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0196887830623 0.0737576698707 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0297275319747 0.150856017488 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150098816689 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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