Some parents do not agree with the way teachers are teaching their children. Do you think that parents should express their disapproval to the teachers?
In the modern world, education is given increasing importance. It is very natural that teachers have different teaching styles, and some of their methods can be readily accepted by parents while others are not. It can be controversial whether parents should express their disapproval to teachers if they do not agree with the teaching style. From my perspective, parent should not express their disapproval to teachers if they are dissatisfied with teaching methods.
Your thesis statement should be able to stand alone, so complete the topic.
First, compared with teachers, parents are not professional enough. Teachers spent years of time on teaching, and thus, they know the students' situation better than parents do. In addition, parents might not know the whole thing because what they know is from their kids, and things can be completely different from children's' eyes. Therefore, without knowing the fact and professional knowledge, showing disapproval is not so wise for parents.
Secondly, expressing disapproval does not necessarily ameliorate the situation. If teacher's method is problematic, it is hard for himself to notice. In that case, expressing disapproval would work. However, the teacher could be so determined about his teaching style that the suggestion from parents could not work. To make things worse, they could treat the kids much strictly. In this sense, parents should not express their disapproval to the teachers.
It is true that there could be some flaw in a teacher's way of teaching. Nevertheless, if parents meet such problem, they should seek for help from the school's primary teacher, and the primary teacher would have a nice talk with the teacher about some fault in his or her teaching style. Moreover, since it is anonymous, the kids could not be discriminated.
In a nutshell, a parent should not show disapproval to teachers. It is wiser to check the real situation at first. If that problem really exists, a meeting with the head teacher can contribute more to solve the problem rather than directly showing disproval to the teacher.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25671641791 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76209585918 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513432835821 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7483274659 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8571428571 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9523809524 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.49006079481 0.236089414692 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1464741524 0.076458572812 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13705667649 0.0737576698707 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242762461965 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147717937153 0.0645574589148 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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