Some parents do not agree with the way teachers are teaching their children. Do you think that parents should express their disapproval to the teachers?
In the modern world, education is given increasing importance. It is very natural that teachers have different teaching styles, and some of their methods can be readily accepted by parents while others are not. It can be controversial whether parents should express their disapproval to teachers if they do not agree with the teaching style. From my perspective, parent should not express their disapproval to teachers if they are dissatisfied with teaching methods.
First, compared with teachers, parents are not professional enough. Teachers spent years of time on teaching, and thus, they know the students' situation better than parents do. In addition, parents might not know the whole thing because what they know is from their kids, and things can be completely different from children's' eyes. Therefore, without knowing the fact and professional knowledge, showing disapproval is not so wise for parents.
Secondly, expressing disapproval does not necessarily ameliorate the situation. If teacher's method is problematic, it is hard for himself to notice. In that case, expressing disapproval would work. However, the teacher could be so determined about his teaching style that the suggestion from parents could not work. To make things worse, they could treat the kids much strictly. In this sense, parents should not express their disapproval to the teachers.
It is true that there could be some flaw in a teacher's way of teaching. Nevertheless, if parents meet such problem, they should seek for help from the school's primary teacher, and the primary teacher would have a nice talk with the teacher about some fault in his or her teaching style. Moreover, since it is anonymous, the kids could not be discriminated.
In a nutshell, a parent should not show disapproval to teachers. It is wiser to check the real situation at first. If that problem really exists, a meeting with the head teacher can contribute more to solve the problem rather than directly showing disproval to the teacher.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26086956522 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78219273732 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509316770186 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4924131315 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.49850080614 0.236089414692 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152281047058 0.076458572812 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137897203242 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285247702508 0.150856017488 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123914215341 0.0645574589148 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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